Webnovel Author: Talleyrand - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Talleyrand

29d

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In itself it's a good story, but the problem is that it's ultra repetitive. I'm on Chapter 482 and I've read the same arc sequence 3 and a half times. An auction, a random one that provokes them and then ends up dying 20 chapters later, and a tide of beasts. Interspersed with artifact and/or overpowered pill fabrications. And of course never a betrayal, a setback or even the slightest development for the MC and his wife. Wife who is supposed to be as strong as him except that we never see him since she is a flower pot most of the time. So if you want to read it, don't read almost 500 chapters in 2 days at the risk of being disgusted and not read it again for probably 6 months.

Following a Hundred Years of Cultivation, I'm dying Before I Got Cheats

Eastern · West Traveler

Talleyrand

2mth

Commented

More than three Devil Fruit is completely broken. It's useless in addition, some spend a whole life mastering their fruits, how is he going to master 3 of them🫠

ch 0 4 4. Copying the Mythical Zoan-Type; Bird-Bird Fruit; Model: Phoenix.

One Piece: Copying The Phoenix Fruit At The Beginning

Anime & Comics · ChaosWriter

Talleyrand

2mth

Commented

Why did Minato die?

ch 28 Chapter 28

Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System

Anime & Comics · Zaelum

Talleyrand

3mth

Posted

Yay Another superperfect Gary Stu, with a really shabby plot... Frankly, I don't recommend the story at all, it really lacks consistency and originality. The MC is not developed at all, the syntax is horrible as well as the grammar. In short, it's painful to read.

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

like this : Testing the patience of Doom is to be unwise

"Testing my patience is to be...unwise, Mephistopheles", he muttered, enunciating every word. The very castle seemed to come to life as enigmatic symbols carved themselves on every brick, boosting his already prodigious prowess.

Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure

Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

Doom doesn't say I he say doom

"Do you fancy yourself secure within these walls, Infernal Jester?", Doom said softly, a touch of amusement crawling into his voice while a complex magic circle manifested itself around his arms. "Your assumption that I'd entertain your words is amusing. Enlighten me, why should I bother to listen?"

Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure

Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

ch 47 Announcement

Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure

Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ

Talleyrand

4mth

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mayhem

ch 10 Chapter 10 A Bat's Deductions

I Am Energy In Dc

Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

Havoc or mayMem for the chaos he represents

ch 10 Chapter 10 A Bat's Deductions

I Am Energy In Dc

Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

By the way now that I think about it it would really be a huge storyline error if you introduced magic now. Your MC lived 4500 years, traveled every corner of this planet and met countless people. NEVER ONCE has he come into contact with magic in any form. But one day like that out of nowhere a magician attacks him. No, it's completely incoherent and stupid. In addition, you clearly pointed out in the first chapter that he was only an immortal human, stronger and faster than a vampire. If you want to make him special so much, keep going, make him progressively stronger and faster like an original in The Vampire Diaries

ch 27 Finding a mate. (update)

The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Movies · Beans_on_a_tree

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

By the way now that I think about it it would really be a huge storyline error if you introduced magic now. Your MC lived 4500 years, traveled every corner of this planet and met countless people. NEVER ONCE has he come into contact with magic in any form. But one day like that out of nowhere a magician attacks him. No, it's completely incoherent and stupid. In addition, you clearly pointed out in the first chapter that he was only an immortal human, stronger and faster than a vampire. If you want to make him special so much, keep going, make him progressively stronger and faster like an original in The Vampire Diaries

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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Movies · Beans_on_a_tree

Talleyrand

4mth

Commented

no magic, no need to distort the original work to this extent. They're werewolves and shapeshifters. Use this. At worst the guy on fire turns into a vampire schizophrenic gifted with pryokinesis

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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Movies · Beans_on_a_tree

Talleyrand

5mth

Commented

according to jkr hagrid's wand measured 40 cm

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Talleyrand

5mth

Commented

He was working on something that came from the Peter Parker of (Earth-751263), the Nano-Tech Suit.

Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

Anime & Comics · Daoist_Over_God

Talleyrand

5mth

Commented

the fact that they say the names of the techniques is only for the reader/viewer. They're not idiots shouting their next move

Amidst the maelstrom, a subtle shift occurred. My vision sharpened, the intricate patterns within the trees and the subterranean roots now laid bare before me. With newfound clarity, I spotted it—a diminutive, wood-skinned demon nestled within a tree. Swiftly, I bellowed, "Constellation Breathing Second Form: Taurus Charge." With resolute steps, I materialized before the tree, executing a horizontal slash that cleaved it in two.

Demon Slayer: I love Stars

Anime & Comics · Joanjudo

Talleyrand

5mth

Commented

the fact that they say the names of the techniques is only for the reader/viewer. They're not idiots shouting their next move

Yet, the relentless voice echoed once more, its grating timbre an insistent call for my retreat. The forest retaliated, roots erupting from the earth in a desperate attempt to ensnare me. Undaunted, I cried out, channeling my strength into every word, "Constellation Breathing Tenth Form: Capricorn Sea Goat." Like water, I flowed through the roots, my movements a symphony of evasion and precision severing each root that came at me with practiced ease.

Demon Slayer: I love Stars

Anime & Comics · Joanjudo

Talleyrand

5mth

Commented

Did they master full breath in one day? Without intensive near-lethal training? Hello plot holes, you weren't very far after all

Kyojuro's expression turned contemplative. "Now that we've mastered Total Concentration Breathing, it's time to integrate it with Flame Breathing. That's when we'll truly unlock its potential and wield it effectively."