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2yr
Replied to MoonBang Hello Author, I think your novel is good, the premise is good and the skills and powerleveling seems fine as well. he only problem that I have is with the cringy romance.
Don't get me wrong romance is a key element, but you make it too cringy( at least for my taste)
I have read about 60 chapters and in the last few I was actually nauseated with all the mentioned romance- like cuddling a lot, kisses on the cheek and constantly use of Baby this, hubby that and bla bla bla.
I ask you to maybe work on that( I hope you will) and lastly good luck with your novel.
The amiable Lisa, the confident Sally, the shy Sophia, the timid Penelope, the observant Nancy, the reserved Tina, the cute and cheerful Candy, and last but not the least, the happy angel Little Judith.
Ancient Supreme Overlord
Urban · MoonBang
2yr
Commented So he is not reincarnated or transmigrated???
ch 0 9 We are…
The Way of a Demon Lord
Fantasy · TheDarkSide
2yr
Replied to SkyLq That was not suffering
That was Build-up and it was amazing
ch 58 Regret
Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
Action · Awespec
2yr
Replied to Giovane_Martins His demeanor is that of the past Ryu, so the arrogance and his behaviour is instilled in him because of that. But he probably does not realise that he is in his second awakening because he never once mentioned anything remotely related to that.
I never once saw him brag about anything, its never mentioned once.
THe sky god is the supposedly the highest existance, so the trial will be tough and as author said you need the mental fortitude to witness his journey.
ch 46 Punishment Grounds
Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
Action · Awespec
2yr
Commented Author Just Slapped all other MCs who are known for their "UNIQUE" features.
However, this young man remained indifferent. His silver, sometimes pale blue, eyes seemed to pierce through all things. To call his brows sword-like was to sell them short, to describe his demeanor as being that of an Emperor was to insult him, to define him as handsome was to call him ugly.
Grand Ancestral Bloodlines
Action · Awespec
2yr
Commented Firstly I will say 'Best of Luck '
and would like to ask will you continue to upload chapters here
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A Lewd Story
Fantasy · Draky_Vampire
Nihility_Daoist
I am the young master
Eastern · Amiro0o