Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapters!

ch 49 Project "Camp -> Settlement" (4)

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Posted

Interesting love story. Not really my cup of tea since I don't read romance novels, but this one might just satisfy your needs for romance. A few typos here and there need correction though, otherwise, it's good.

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Posted

The marvelous background is depicted to perfection. Secondary characters and main characters are so life-like that the story becomes immersive. Added to my library. Good job author.

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Posted

Not my usual type of read, but pretty good for a genre I'm not a fan of. The grammar issues are rare, the writing is neat, and it is a pleasure for the eyes. Good work author.

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Posted

Good book, the writing style is original, there are some punctuation, typos, and grammar issue but nothing too glaring. The characters are well painted, though there may be a lot of them at the start of the novel to my taste; I prefer to familiarize myself with a handful of characters first.

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Commented

tftc

ch 0 3 Chapter 3: A bittersweet party ending

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Commented

tftc

ch 0 2 Chapter 2: The secret room

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Posted

A light-hearted story with a relatable character who looks like an average person. Borderline funny on the edges, fairly well written, the few grammar issues did not hinder my read. Good work author.

Bizzare Tales Of My Mysterious Pet Shop

Urban · Sneakycat098

Yoan_Roturier

1yr

Posted

A touching story with calming vibes. Only two chapters so far but they set the tone for what may happen next. It feels a lot like a slice of life type of novel with a relaxing pace that cradles us as we keep on reading. Good work author.

A very good story with vivid scenes and characters that actually feel alive, not just 3D archetypes. Nicely written with a few minor grammar issues. I think I'll be binging this story for the next few days. Good work author

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Yoan_Roturier

2yr

Posted

The story is well written as far as I can tell. There are a few repetitive words and turns of phrases but you generally gloss over them if you don't pay attention to those. The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, well balanced in general. Characters are interesting, my personal favorite is the Monitor (yeah not the MC). What I like the most though are the dialogues. They have a living feeling to them. Overall it's pretty good. For improvement, I would suggest more

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Fantasy · Stormzz

Yoan_Roturier

2yr

Posted

Alright, so far so good. I think you can improve on the writing but it's not something that can be learned in one go and the only efficient way to learn it is to be curious and keep writing. I'm not into romance so I can't exactly review this the way a romance reader would. But according to what I read, I think you're doing just fine. Keep up the good work, author.

This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together

Urban · Rayne_Rue

Yoan_Roturier

2yr

Commented

Is he like the guy who's gonna take the other guy's place ahaha! xD

All he had to say was "he knew nothing about it and he was sorry I had to find out in a way that I did " he sighs and adds on by saying would stick by my side and even stop being friends with Emir.

This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together

Urban · Rayne_Rue

Yoan_Roturier

2yr

Replied to kuhaku_sora

Lol, no worries xD

All the players murmured to themselves as they finally witnessed the difference of powers against me. They were like ants to me, and I was the alligator that preyed upon the swamps. None of them had the skills to beat me. Even the game preferred talented people over pay-to-win scoundrels, which did not differ from the skirmish.

I was a Nerfed Hero in Another World

Fantasy · kuhaku_sora

Yoan_Roturier

2yr

Commented

The rays of the summer sun streamed into the bedroom through the open window blinds. Jo woke up just before 6.00 am as she felt some warm light on her face. It was an amazing feeling to wake up without the after-effects of a great night with alcohol: a pounding headache, but most importantly, no burning sensation or stomach discomfort and nausea. She felt refreshed. "No more parties! No more alcohol! No more madness!" She decided.