Webnovel Author: Tomorrowceases - Novel Collection

thanks for having read so far i agree with you tbh when i wrote, i didn't do it for the reader, i did it for myself

I'm the author and don't see this as constructive criticism, no. The MC is basically a baby at first. Just got his 'sense of self' on hand. He's not ruthless. When he kill humans he thinks that's just the way. That's what he's been taught right from the get-go. This is nurture. Well, there's a lot to tell; but with just this point, you can see your opinion is not founded at all. Anyway, thanks for reading the few you read, man. I appreciate it. About the writing quality not being to its top, I must agree with you. Thanks for your review too. I mean what I wrote with respect. To anyone who reads this, you should try and at least read the first book (it's entirely free) in its entirety. You can't see what the story will be like if you don't. Or at the very least the first 35 chapters or so. It's deeper than that above.