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Since when does he need to eat them? He's always just used his power to absorb them before...

This makes no sense. If he's so stuck on Kat then why even bother with this harem? He's grown up enough to do all these things but not enough to tell these girls they don't even stand a chance? He's selfish to not even consider them. If he's only going to be with one girl and that girl may not even exist anymore and even if she does it'll probably be a while before he could figure it out then all of the words spent on the romance is just a waste. My main point: If there's literally no point to it (e.g. the harem) then you shouldn't spend so much time writing about it. Either develop it or let it go.

I think more context is needed because what does world class actually mean? The same goes for the stats. I can tell almost doubling his stats was a huge jump considering normally you only get 3 stat points per level but how do his stats compare to everyone else? Other than that it's been good so far.

How about a dao of cloning/replication since besides the traits and treasures that has been his biggest help. Imagine his subordinates being able to produce clones as well. He'd still be able to take OP to another level 🤣

Also, the sword said is a grand one but the summoning one is a lesser. That definitely seems backwards as even Noah pointed out so a lesser dao of time should be possible.

I feel like this is selfish and lacking foresight (which I guess should be expected at his age). He mentioned how strong all the demons were so he could have pointed this out and used all those gates to train up more people. He can't fight all the demons if it comes to an all out war...

This makes no sense. He's a summoner but he can't use his summons? They should be judging how well he uses and has raised his summons not just how good he is at combat as an individual.

This whole thing with his sister is really annoying. It's barely believable that MC is the same level as these people who have spent months in game after a few weeks but his sister is somehow already the same level and has such good equipment she can just ignore it?

She really isn't a very good "sister"

They should all learn that skill really

So based on this less phases = less powerful does that mean what is learned at later stages will always be a less powerful technique? Or are there techniques that can only be learned at later stages because they are more powerful? e.g. a technique that could be learned at stage 1 but only has 3 phases vs a technique that could only be learned at stage 6 but also only has 3 phases

I guess I thought Luke knew based on his interaction with Elen and the other family members so if he doesn't then that makes sense. I'm also basing thinks on my culture where someone like Abby might talk to her parents and say something like "you'll never believe who I saw." From context it seems this culture is more reserved and secretive along with not spending a lot of time with family so it makes sense. I'm just glad he isn't running around with a mask and an edgy nickname like so many other stories like this 😁

I really appreciate how you emphasize that cultivation isn't the entirety of these people's lives. Especially how you had Ruth change from what seemed like a single minded cultivator to someone who wants to explore other things. I never understand MCs that do nothing but try and gain strength but do nothing else. Even if they claim they're trying to protect friends and family they never spend time with them so what's the point?

Divine sense is usable but I'm not entirely sure if that proves anything but based on all the other evidence I'd say at least some of them are like the treasures.

He didn't give his last name but at least two prominent family members are there who know who he is...

How exactly is he hiding his cultivation speed if these people can easily find out about his coma and lack of prior cultivation...

Agreed and he even said just a couple of chapters back he wanted to hide his strength. 8 years should be nothing in the cultivation world and he would still be under 30 (I think that was the age limit).

He said earlier he doesn't want people to know his strength but now he's going to fight in a famous tournament...

I'm really confused. If MC is struggling with mana control and even Lilith took some much time to learn it, how is Bing Xue already seemingly so good at it?