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Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.Horrible novel and looks to be written by AI. Story makes zero sense and also tons of positive bot reviews.

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I honestly paid money after reading the first free 19 chapters and I honestly have to warn everyone else. Don't waste your money on this horrible novel. As stated in another review the author keeps repeating the MC's name and always says Dean mckenzie did this and that. Dean Mckenzie slayed the dragon. What a shit Chinese novel. The story is slow paced from what I can see so far which is a plus to me but might be a negative towards others. The MC is also horrible at naming things such as calling his skeleton "doggy 1 and 2." In the earlier chapters I believe around 6 or 7 he decided to call the skeleton "dean Mckenzie" which is the same name as himself. All in all if you read this don't expect much.

Does the grammar get any better in the later chapters of this novel?

if you are deciding to read this novel currently than I warn you now. The grammar is absolutely atrocious and I have seen some Chinese novels better than this.

I have gotten to chapter 124 and I am going to have to drop this. The story is good. But, the grammar is absolutely horrendous that it's super hard to read.

The novel has serious potential. But, it needs a serious re-work since it's confusing as fuck to read. I tried reading past chapter 20 but wasn't able to since you can't tell who is talking and author gave way to much information at the beginning.

Honestly, I could barely read this. The story is SUPER fast paced. Also, you really should try and put more words per chapter instead of only like 2-3 small paragraphs. I understand you are writing this for fun probably but believe me when I say this. Many people will drop this novel is it isn't fixed.....

To start this review off the Grammar is absolutely terrible. The Author constantly calls someone a she than halfway in her sentence calls her a "he" and vice versa for some other characters. Also, please add some more commas since it will help break up some sentences so they make a little more sense. Besides the grammar the story isn't bad.