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lol. go touch some grass

Good stuff. It absolutely pulls you in and mesmerizes you with the beauty of the story. I haven't read something like this in a while. Keep up the good work author!!!

It's a really good read, one I haven't had in a while. It has very solid writing _ it's not just about grammar and the stuff, you can tell the author's good the moment you read it. I like the characters introduced by the author and the way the story unfolds. It only has 10 chapters right now, but every chapter is pretty length, about 3 - 4 times the length of a normal chapter here in webnovel. All in all, the author have done an amazing job, and I hope he/she keeps up the great work!

Haaah. This is a pretty good read for me. There's not much comparison since there aren't many Arifureta fanfics out there but this one doesn't seem to be the wish-fulfillment fanfic where mc is the most handsome guy around and gets 10 billion girls. Well, at least for the time being. This fanfic has actual characters with emotions in them (yeah, this is my main judging criteria) and the plot seems to be progressing nicely. So yeah, 4.8 out of 5.

Yeah those chapters are super short

Uhh, yeah. I hate to be the one doing this, but this fanfic... well, there's very little point in reading it. The content of the first 10 chapters or so (maybe more, but I didn't read further) is plain repetition of the previous chapters. The same content, the same format, the same formula, with just the topic being different. I can even see the pattern here: Mc is talented --> Mc learns a new thing --> Mc makes great progress in new thing --> People are in awe. Basically just that. In fact, there several words such as "grace" and "ethereal" which have been repeated so much that I noticed it despite not actively looking and trying to dissect the fanfic. Also, the reader feels extremely detached to the mc because, well, we know nothing about him asides from the fact that he is talented. We never see him conversing normally (day to day interactions), we never know his likes and dislikes, we can't see and feel what he's thinking, etc. Basically, the mc feels like an emotionless machine. I don't know about others, but I find him quite boring and basically skimmed over the remaining chapters. Asides from that, the grammar is solid and you'll find no mistakes there. At least I found none.

As the Chinese say, this fanfic is "full of water". Couldn't have made it more boring, but then again, what was I expecting....