Webnovel Author: Scarlet_Embers

Also he 'stole' yet another idea from my list of ideas and started a young justice fanfic as well. I'm going to kill him…not soon but I'm going to do it…eventually.

Scarlet_Embers

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Replied to Alexia_Possible

Yeah, I also don't think he really needs a father figure, but I do wonder what it would be like if Oliver would kinda get him more comfortable with male authority figures and help him get over some of his trauma- as a sort of character development, y'know?

ch 43 Chapter 42

Scarlet_Embers

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Thank you for the chapter!!!! :D I really liked this chapter- first of all the scene with Dinah and Oliver was really wholesome and fluffy and warm, and I'm glad they all finally talked about it. Plus, I think Oliver will kinda reach something close to a father figure, which would be positive. And Conner developing his powers further and Dante developing powerful, trustworthy people around him and not fighting a lone battle is great! I also like how he used his powers- I like this 'using everything you can' mindset more than being hesitant because of the ethical difficulty of invading another person's mind and essentially 'stealing' the skills they worked hard to get- because behaving morally righteous right now would really put his life in danger, so I'm glad he made a more rational decision. Plus it is REALLY cool, this kind of manipulation-just crafty and useful and discreet. I really like where this story is going!! Also, thank you for pushing down the voices of a couple of annoying idiots that say whatever sh#t they do. Keep doing that, ignore them.

ch 43 Chapter 42

Scarlet_Embers

10mth

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NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Ignore them, Please!!! There also lots of people who enjoy a complex teenage MC that undergoes character development!! Jeansus Christmas, don't stop writing because of them!! Ughhhhh!! ...And thank you for the chapter :) P.S- I really liked everything up to now, and the chapter that Dante cried was one of my favorites, also I like that you didn't make Dinah dumb and that she noticed his trauma and is trying to help, and the ending of this chapter was really funny XD

Author Rant: Since some people want an emotionless fifteen year that has his life and future put together, I've officially lost some motivation to write this. I'll be taking a break from writing for a few days or so.

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

Scarlet_Embers

10mth

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Well she's smart so she'll just let go of her crush herself, and instead stay simply as a very loyal teammate, and one day she'll get in a relationship with somebody else.

Also ran into another problem while going through my plans for this story. That problem/oversight is Artemis. Now I need to figure out what to do with her without ruining this book.

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

Scarlet_Embers

10mth

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Depends on what you're planning to do with it, I guess. It can always declare that it wants to name itself, and that would really work if it's ever going to manifest as a being independent of Dante's body. If it's always going to be like this, I think calling it The Force or something similar is okay.

Author Rant: Now I have run into a problem, I can't figure out a name for Dante's force and I can't keep calling it 'the force' every time so I need suggestions.

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

Scarlet_Embers

10mth

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Friendly advice- be careful with your personal information. And sleep is annoyingly important. Thank you for the chapter!!

My sleeping schedule got even worse. I'll need a break soon if I want to live to see my 19th birthday.

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

Scarlet_Embers

10mth

Replied to Walkingstick00

I second that (actually, about sixth that or something), WE NEED ANOTHER CHAPTERRR!!!!!!

ch 90 Returning

Extra's Magic

Fantasy · Gurdon

Scarlet_Embers

11mth

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Hello, gentlefolks :)

ch 26 Ch 24: Help?

Surviving as the Second Main Lead: Second Lead's POV

Fantasy · daygonyuuki

Scarlet_Embers

11mth

Replied to DevilDarkness

That's great!! And thank you for answering, I wasn't expecting that. Good luck, thank you for writing and have a nice day! :D

ch 11 Announcement & Questions Unanswered (not a chapter)

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Fantasy · DevilDarkness

Scarlet_Embers

11mth

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I really want to read a chapter on earth, after his death. Like, his family and friends in his funeral and stuff.

ch 11 Announcement & Questions Unanswered (not a chapter)

Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain

Fantasy · DevilDarkness

Scarlet_Embers

11mth

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Thank you for the chapter!!! :D Aaah I've been waiting for this!! Have a great day!

ch 25 Chapter 24

Young Justice: Ghost

Anime & Comics · Arokey

Scarlet_Embers

11mth

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...then don't torture yourself.

Author Rant: Just because I said that Sword Birth gear from DXD seemed interesting, I'm being forced to watch the anime. I'm at season 2 and so far…..I'm not amused…