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FantasyBliss30

FantasyBliss30

female LV 2

Love to read and write fantasy, and give wings to my imagination.

2021-03-09 Joined United States

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I was just looking for a simile to a great golden palace, and beast came to mind. Let me know if you can think of something else. Haha.

The city's streets were straight as an arrow and smooth as a breeze. The two men took a sharp left turn, and at the very end of the street, Sachi saw the palace of the king of OneRealm, Asura Digvi. It was a magnificent golden beast, sprawling for acres, with another acre of palace ground contained in its walls.

Book Of Asura

Book Of Asura

Fantasy · FantasyBliss30

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Replied to Kingsman_Charles
Daww, thank you!!

ch 0 2 The Mystic Capital [Sachi]

Book Of Asura

Book Of Asura

Fantasy · FantasyBliss30

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Hahahaha, that's my favorite song!

Children giggled and chased after a mimic who had dressed as the divine lord Shiva waving his trident in one hand and rocking his kettle drum in the other. A small group of human scholars crossed the street, arguing heatedly about a passage from a scripture. In the courtyard of a temple, beautiful apsaras danced to the heavenly music of their husbands, the gandharvas. An audience of gods looked on and showered praises on the performers.

Book Of Asura

Book Of Asura

Fantasy · FantasyBliss30

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Thank you! :)
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I thought vampires preferred virgin's blood. But I may be wrong. Really nice lores and world building btw.

"She...she is a virgin?" Simon questioned. He sounded like he was going to run mad very soon. It mustn't be so! A virgin's blood was like a poison to vampires. Just a little drop of it would kill you and make you... "She is a virgin?" He asked again. It mustn't be so. He felt like his stomach was rotting. He had never tasted a virgin blood before. He never knew it could be as sweet as that yet poisonous. A virgin's blood was only served by vampire royals to vampire traitors as punishment. That was the main reason vampires loved having sex with a human lady before they fed on their blood. That was the normal routine. He never believed there would be a virgin in a night club and he was still finding it hard to believe Jael did it on purpose. Why would he? "Did...did I offend his highness?" He questioned. It was his first time calling him by his role. Jael hated being referred to that, and he knew it but somehow he thought he had done something to deserve such a punishment. He was a prince and should be forever regarded as that.

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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I am, too.

"I am, either. We are all fictions to the world." Tabitha said and before Asherah could reply, she threw a tiny blue sword at her and it thrust into her heart. She learnt this from her mother and she knew their best spot. She smiled, "I have been waiting for this day."

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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this is a confusing sentence. May be reword?

"Hera...do you remember hearing any word immediately the coffin flew open?"

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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Tears rolled down her cheeks....?

"I...I don't want to keep doing this, Tabitha. I'm sick of these." Tears were rolling down her eyes and her already paled skin became paler. Her eyes looked orange and scary and she felt like something strange was going to happen. She was feeling very emotional. Though this wasn't the first time trying this nor was it the third time but she didn't know why she felt different this time. She felt like she could eat up her whole flesh and never stop. She felt the joy in her blood and she thought there would be more joy in feeding on others. The demon in her was rising so fast and she could feel it.

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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Tabitha bent down to pick up....?

Tabitha straddled down to pick up the knife and she put it in her palm, "I said all those because of what I learnt from mother." After Asherah collected the knife from her she continued, "There are many things I don't know yet. How sure are we that you are still an immortal? I learnt that you were greatly injured and locked up in a coffin by a powerful witch who must have been dead by now."

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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haha good point

"Didn't you say I had slept for a thousand years and even before that I was an immortal?"

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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Great start! May I make a quick suggestion if you don't mind; just a reframing of the events. :) "Hera..." The voice startled Asherah and the steel knife fell from her hand to the floor.

A little wind from nowhere blew away the knife from Asherah and it fell a few metres from where she stood. Asherah glared at the little witch standing before her and forced a little smile, "It's nothing, Tabitha. It's nothing."

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Lucifer's Last Pawn

Fantasy Romance · Blooddoctor

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made his 'way' toward....
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Rune Knight

Rune Knight

Fantasy · 0zymandias

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Porcupine is an accurate imagery haha
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Rune Knight

Rune Knight

Fantasy · 0zymandias

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Usage of your own special fantasy words like Upheaval is excellent.
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Rune Knight

Rune Knight

Fantasy · 0zymandias

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I am right there in the battlefield. This is such a great description.
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Rune Knight

Rune Knight

Fantasy · 0zymandias

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