PsychoMermaide

While i do admit that the ending seemed kind of rushed, i dont necessarily think that it was bad though. Anyway, Vol. 2 seems to have more of a plot and i’m enjoying reading it

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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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I suggest that if you really want to write it, then perhaps read other authors’ work as a reference or guide. It’s never going to be perfect on your first try, but you’ll get there.

(A/N: I am so bad at English that I can't even make good small fan service, dang it!)

A hollow's story(An isekai story)

Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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You’ll get there 😂👍

(A/N: I am so bad at English that I can't even make good small fan service, dang it!)

A hollow's story(An isekai story)

Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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Is the yuri coming soon? 😭 not to rush you tho, just curious

ch 32 Bonus Chapter: Youuuth!

A hollow's story(An isekai story)

Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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Of course! I really like this story

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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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Hey it should be “he has” instead of “he have”

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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

Commented

Here there is no need to put ‘a’ before ‘good hips’ because hips is plural

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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

Hi, so you mention at the start of each chapter that you want us to correct any grammar we find, I don’t normally do this because i’m not sure how to correct grammar without sounding rude 😅 but um so instead of “were” it should be “where” Sorry if this accidentally came off as me being rude

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Fantasy · SORAhasGONE

PsychoMermaide

2yr

Commented

Oohh is Core slowly starting to become a yandere?

ch 202 Chapter 202 A sudden event

The little sister's system

Fantasy · Delirish

PsychoMermaide

2yr

Commented

Thank you for the chapter!

ch 15 Chapter 15 – Contract

Magical Giants: The Life of Zmeya

Fantasy · ShuviLily

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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You eat a pizza a lot 😂

(Author:...I don't know what you're talking about *eating pizza* *nom*)

When I Reincarnated Together with Her

Fantasy · Vinzky

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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Oh ok, no problem!

ch 0 9 Chapter 7: What my fault?!

When I Reincarnated Together with Her

Fantasy · Vinzky

PsychoMermaide

2yr

Commented

This reminds me of Shimoneta 😅

Of course, Emilia wasn't listening at all, as her eyes had almost glazed over, and once her supply of love nectar ran dry from Dixie's milky white thighs, she gave them a punishing bite before moving directly to devour the source.

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Fantasy · DustyDream

PsychoMermaide

2yr

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Hello, um i did make a comment about a spelling mistake (very minor) but it seems to have dissapeared and i’m not sure if you saw it. sorry i dont usually comment about grammar but you ordered so i felt that i should, but Im uncertain whether it’s there or not

ch 0 9 Chapter 7: What my fault?!

When I Reincarnated Together with Her

Fantasy · Vinzky

PsychoMermaide

2yr

Commented

Hey I think you might have meant “on the handle” not “in the handle”….I mean both kinda work but “in the handle” is kinda odd and I’m not sure if you meant it that way. Sorry if this sounds condescending, Im not trying to be, I dont usually correct typos but you ordered so….

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Fantasy · Vinzky

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