Elisa_Beckett

2mth

Commented

There were some repetitive bits but its ok

ch 45 Chapter 45

It's just a Julie thing you wouldn't understand

Urban · Kelly abande

Elisa_Beckett

5mth

Replied to Victoria_444

Great

ch 67 67. George is mine

Transmigration: Return Of The Lost Heiress

Urban · Victoria_444

Elisa_Beckett

5mth

Posted

Well, I admit the grammar and flow was top notch and not to give much spoilers I kinda felt disturbed somewhere in this book especially the FL. For a story to be special there have to be flaws I know. Generally it was a good read so dive in on the rollercoaster.

Transmigration: Return Of The Lost Heiress

Urban · Victoria_444

Elisa_Beckett

5mth

Commented

This is what I am talking about. The FL is so toxic

ch 67 67. George is mine

Transmigration: Return Of The Lost Heiress

Urban · Victoria_444

Elisa_Beckett

5mth

Commented

The story so far is good but one thing disturbs me so far, no offence dear author but the FL is so toxic that ML somehow is suppressed in many ways. Even though she had suffered a lot and not everyone is perfect but she shouldn't be so rude and end up acting arrogantly. she should at least act humble even though she's reluctant. I am terribly affected by her character sincerely. Thanks for the chapter

ch 40 40. I'm unsatisfied

Transmigration: Return Of The Lost Heiress

Urban · Victoria_444

Elisa_Beckett

1yr

Commented

i felt confused who did Wu Aili get married to? Is it Alex?

ch 196 A long and happy future

Elisa_Beckett

1yr

Posted

I've just read the Synopsis and it's interesting however, I am confused about one part the sex of Ren Shiyuan is it a she or a he? Because the Synopsis describes Ren Shiyuan as a she... please clarify that bit if necessary otherwise the story is worth a try. [img=recommend]

Beast Under Her Dress: Princess Don't Run!

Urban · BerriApplepi

Elisa_Beckett

1yr

Commented

Author Chichii I love you so much.

ch 69 Monster

Flash Marriage: The Domineering Wife

Urban · Chichii

Elisa_Beckett

2yr

Commented

Mmh mystery ahead. What a suspense?

ch 25 Winx returns.

Her sword landed on the ground with a loud sound that shook the entire block further blasting the floor. The guards of the castle rapidly dashed to the blast source. They came face to face with a powerful surge of energy that sent them flying in the air, scattering them from their heavy metallic attires.