Maeve_Kelly_0107 - Profile

i loved the story overall. the characters and plot development fit nicely within the genre. my only concern is misuse of articles, syntax, and pronouns. oh deary. I was rewriting sentences in my mind, thinking this author needs a copy editor. or a subscription to Grammarly. I know English as a native writer and speaker can be difficult. Anyone writing in English, as a non-english speaker can find these three areas challenging. Grammarly or a decent copy editor can fix that issue. it's what publishing houses use for their authors. the modern way, get Grammarly. you won't regret it.

Excellent writing. convincing characters and building background story. lots of twists. fun read. addictive. Good cliffhangers and lots of sexy suspense. yummy.

For a revenge, true love, reincararion trope, it's a lovely read. hope more chapters post soon. i want to continue this reading adventure.[img=recommend]