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Art_Otzenberger

Art_Otzenberger

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2021-03-11 Joined United States

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Since when are their two 9 of Diamonds in a deck?

On the fourth card, Ye Feng had an 8 of Clubs, while the man in the tuxedo had a 9 of Diamonds. He maintained his advantage.

Found 100 Million In My Rented Apartment

Found 100 Million In My Rented Apartment

Urban · Supreme Yi Fan

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No items from a BOSS. How disappointing .

The rewards were indeed generous, a whopping 300000 experience points, more than tenfold of the previous BOSS's.

Talent Awakening: I, the Weakest Awakened, Start with Dragonfire Spell

Talent Awakening: I, the Weakest Awakened, Start with Dragonfire Spell

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

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Datas isn’t the correct term here. Datum is the singular form of data. Data itself is already a plural form of the word. Adding an “s” isn’t correct.

After a few seconds, Atticus selected two different datas at the same time. Immediately, the platform emitted a bright glow, and Liquid Metal emerged from the bottom, coalescing and twisting until it formed two robots.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

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Your double use of cascade in the first sentence is confusing . A better structure would have been something like” flowed like a cascade…”

Her vibrant locks cascade like a cascade of flames, framing her delicate features. Despite her tender age, her presence commands notice. Standing at a height just shy of four feet, she exudes a youthful charm that is as enchanting as it is endearing.

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Fantasy · RealmWeaver

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The pontiff , not the sage.

But they did not know that Sage Merlin was under hypnosis all along!

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy

Fantasy · xlntz

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Please, for the love of God!!!! Stop using that term!!!!!! It’s like having to listen to someone who uses “literally” in everything they say!
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Order Immortal

Order Immortal

Fantasy · Kush63

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I’m enjoying the story, but stop using that word. It’s quite superfluous here (and no I didn’t need to add ‘quite’ I’m just following your bad pattern) and is the wrong word to use as well.
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Order Immortal

Order Immortal

Fantasy · Kush63

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… carved into …
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Order Immortal

Order Immortal

Fantasy · Kush63

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Please stop using the term unarguably. Just use arguably. Every time it has been used so far the better term to fit what you’re trying to say is arguably.
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Order Immortal

Order Immortal

Fantasy · Kush63

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Grey *couldn’t* care less… is the appropriate phrase. The way it’s worded means he does care about it.

Grey could care less, after getting the direction of where he should head from Void, he didn't slow down, instead, he increased his speed. 

Affinity:Chaos

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

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Cleopatra was Greek, this descriptiodescription doesn’t.

Unconsciously, he compared her with Gwen. Gwen was like an ember for Emery, something warm and something he still couldn't touch but could get close to without getting burnt. But this girl, Klea, Emery felt like she was a fire that would eat him up if he got too close. Klea was young, the same age as them, but her dark hair, big round eyes coupled with black linings on the edges, and attire that showed off her brown curvaceous body, was enough to make Emery's heart jump against his chest. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. She had this unique womanly appeal that Gwen didn't have.

Earth's Greatest Magus

Earth's Greatest Magus

Fantasy · Avan

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Just a small *lesson*

"Just a small listen," Leo said. "You might be a 1st Circle Aura Knight and think that's enough. Remember that there are people stronger than that."

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

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… while cobblestone paths *wound* their way…

In the distance, he could see a magnificent stone-built townhouse with a towering spire standing proudly at the heart of the village, while narrow cobblestone paths winded their way through the community. The entire place was incredibly small though. Compared to actual cities, it was a lot smaller and had fewer than a thousand people.

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

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But *the very least* of that…

His sentence was a beautiful lie filled with truths. He had indeed spent more than 10 hours every day practicing for the last 6 months. Heck. For the last two months, he hadn't spared a minute for rest. But very less of that was actually toward Aura training. 

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

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He would have to *hasten* his ….

He got the information he needed. He would have to fasten his pace. He hoped that he had more time, but he didn't. He would have to attempt to break through quickly after consolidating his current level.

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

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