Webnovel Author: SP_Basilio - Novel Collection

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The story is very interesting and fascinating. It is filled with intrigue and plotting so that immediately sucks me in the story as I like those kind of things. I suggest to the readers to hang on tight for its going to be a wild ride.

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The novel is filled with action and thriller which so as to say provides a breathe of fresh from all the other novels on this platform. I highly recommend reading this.

Altough the author could use some improvements such as the paragraph being too lengthy, author shoulf trim it down a little bit to allow for more easier of reading. All in all the story is quite nice and interesting.

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Quite interesting. The author tells her story through an unconventional way of telling stories. She made it possible by combining different perspectives that I really like. Great job author!

To give the author a chance to improve. I'll be giving 4 stars as there are alot of aspects in the novel that can be improved such as the grammar. Furthermore the author took on a different path in writing and that is what interests me. So Author don't give up, there's still room for improvements[img=recommend]

There's too many uncertainties. So I'll be giving it 4 stars. To start off, Author should install grammarly to improve their writing quality. As the novel is still in its infancy I wouldn't be able to write a complete review. However I find the characters interesting so don't give up author. After all hardwork pays off[img=recommend]

I highly suggest to improve the title by capitalising the first letter, like this (My Chaos System). Then the chapter too so it would look pleasing to the eye for the readers and not be a turn off. Furthermore I too suggest using grammarly to improve the writing quality as I have seen numerous positions where a coma could have made the reading time more fluid. All in all I find that the novel to be a very interesting read. Though it could use some improvement. However, keep up the momentum author! Hardwork garners experience and moat importantly it pays off![img=recommend]

Thank you for the generous review!

I have read the first few chapters and I can say is that the story is very interesting to read. Though I am not sure of the writing quality as it could use a little better. I highly suggest to use grammarly to improve your writing quality. All in all it has a firm plot and good characters.

To anyone reading this. The story revolves around the nations and its citizens so the leads will be changing from time to time. To allow for a better view of the world.

Shameless Author review here! I am a big fan of military and isekai genres and I have read numerous titles ranging from GATE to Nihonkoku Shoukan. So as of now with my current state of mind that is filled with inspiration and confidence, I released The First Light Of A New Age where I inserted my own twist and plot into the mix of past military isekai genres. I hope you all like and enjoy reading!

I have read the first few chapters of the story and the only thing I could say was perfect. Perfect for people who just want to read something casual for once. Being exposed to too much action this novel provides a soft feeling of tranquillity. Overall the novel is very descriptive I just hope that the paragraphs are a little more shorter to make it easy to read and the grammar is good too. Keep it up, author!