zoradante

1yr

Commented

well. humans have the greatest endurance.

Since the horses hadn't been able to burn off energy in quite some time, they were willing to run for nearly two hours before needing a break. Trenton had originally picked the horses because the breeds were known for their endurance.

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Commented

Eat slow mate, humans digest more quickly when they eat slowly...

After eating quickly to avoid the awkwardness in the dining hall, he and Trenton were about to bid each other s good day and return to their usual tasks, but they saw a horse galloping through the opening of the fortress with no rider on its back.

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Commented

your book really deserves contract. Such a shame that bad books get contracted while yours is not.

ch 29 Heavy Thoughts

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Commented

I'm starting to get scared that he really skipped leg day.

The way he still walked in a way that lacked confidence told her he didn't have any idea how his shoulders seemed to have broadened or how his chest barely fit into his old tattered shirt anymore. If she had more money, she would try to dress him more properly.

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Commented

I'm sorry to say,but i always hate it when only arms are mentioned as grown in size. Please give respect to shoulder,back,chest,obliques,legs,glutes,neck and calf.

"Your arms have doubled in size," Sir Alix observed, glancing up from the bowl he was hunched over. "You don't look like a teenager anymore."

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Commented

no chapter??????

ch 27 Hit Me

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Replied to AzuritePaladin

expert.

"You naughty boy," the baroness said. "Not tonight, honey… I'm still married, so we can only play like this okay~"

Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa

Fantasy · melonball

zoradante

1yr

Commented

bro he did one shot today and his libido is at half capacity? A man should shot at least 5 times a day not 4 much less shooting 1 and only having half energy left.

Devon groaned, sexually frustrated. He was at half capacity when it came to his libido at the moment because he already had sex earlier today, but even half capacity was a lot to manage. It felt like his libido skyrocketed ever since his stint in purgatory. Again, maybe that was another hidden perk that he received but didn't get any information on.

Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa

Fantasy · melonball

zoradante

1yr

Commented

Finally. Bulking season starts.

"We've got to build up your muscle somehow."

I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest

Fantasy · QueenFrieza

zoradante

1yr

Commented

that guy needs to train with sword real quick. His inexperienced movements and awkward fights makes this novel really boring.

Blushing, the blonde nymph covered her eyes with her fingers while waving bye to Devon. With a satisfied grin on his face and his ballsacks empty of semen, Devon filled his canteen full of water and slung the moonlight longsword across his back and began the long journey back to town, on foot.

Dead Man’s Harem (R-18). Since I can’t kill myself, I’ll find other wa

Fantasy · melonball

zoradante

1yr

Commented

well,to be a good swordsman you dont need big and wild swings, you need precise and as much as small movements to take down the enemy. But if you are fighting with several people you need to occupy the space so it's okay to do wild big swings. And footwork is very important as well. You shouldn't stand at one place forever,you need to move always. Though they are in the water so do not know anything.

However, just being in good physical shape did not make one a good swordsman. It was a prerequisite to a certain extent, yes, but the ancient skill of killing with swords had a bit more finesse to it than simply giving a chimpanzee a sharp metal stick.