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So far, pretty amazing! I love the premise of a first person book and how the main character doesn't talent, but we all know that the main character does have talent (we just don't know when it will appear.) I don't know mucj but about the world background but the character design is pretty 'un mature, kid-like, naive." I don't know. Maybe the main character will grow.

This book is actually really good. The book has an unique background that has some similarities with other books but the 'virus' part makes it stand out. Though, you update too slow

Writing Quality is meh, just a few mistakes here and there. Everyone has that problem. Stability of Updates... I have seen many comments of screwing up people's privildges but otherwise than that, I think its not too bad. Story Development is pretty good, I can see how the story progresses and how the main character gets stronger by the chapter. Although, I don't like how slow the main character gets stronger but thats just based off my preference. Character design is not bad. He seems courageous but at the same time, slightly calculative. World background is not too bad. It slightly stands out compared to other webnovel where there is more gods and blessing premise. So, In short its pretty good (if you ignore all those spam comments) Also, this is such a coincidence.

Not bad, I like the character's personality and everything is pretty much above average in my standards. Though it does start a bit slow, things ick up the pace real quick

Writing quality is quite good, I feel like he uses a lot of unique words and compares certain topics with something else to help us understand. It updates every single day, once per day. Though I'm not too sure when. Story development is good because we can see the story progress and there is already a bit of character development. Character design is fresh and unique. He's like a child who probably didn't have a proper childhood but at the same time, he seems to have high intelligence. World background is not really known. We do know that this is an age of mana, new technology and powers?? Though its only 5 chaps so far so maybe more will be revealed

I love it the story. I have read up chapter 198 and the story never fails me besides the occasional grammar flip ups. Though the plot moves quite slow but still

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I like it! Its a really good book. It also updates fast so I don't have to spend around waiting all day. There are some grammar errors here and there but it doesn't ruin the flow of the novel

Its pretty good. Some lines can be re-written for better clarity. I do like your premise of an idea. I also can't wait for Astrid to kick some butt.