Rose_Neilsen_0768

1mth

Commented

thought mc was male ??????????????

ch 16 Chapter 16: Gaining the Power of Loyalty and the Wizard's Apprentice_1

The witch thought I am a Demon God

Eastern · Orange Cat Dragon

Rose_Neilsen_0768

1mth

Commented

ok not creepy at all 🙄

ch 0 4 Chapter 4: The Explorer and the Burnt Wine Inn_1

The witch thought I am a Demon God

Eastern · Orange Cat Dragon

Rose_Neilsen_0768

1mth

Commented

🤣

ch 54 Spirit Communication Technique

Rose_Neilsen_0768

1mth

Commented

ok I know someone is going to chew me out for this comment but I have to say it anyway.! Anywho is is used way to often and the story would be much better if you get rid of it from here on out for everyone's sanity please ime begging you!!🥺

ch 0 4 Guide Him or Kill Him

Rose_Neilsen_0768

2mth

Commented

well played man well played I tip my hat to you, if I gad one that is 🫠

ch 0 4 4. Trigger hidden mission, Old Mage's invitation_1

Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start

Games · Dull Fireball

Rose_Neilsen_0768

2mth

Commented

sneaky author I read that points thing like part of the dang book 🫣

ch 14 Chapter 14 Going to Mu Group Tomorrow_1

Rose_Neilsen_0768

2mth

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I wasn't saying anything bad I was just trying to say i liked it enough to have longer chapters . sorry if u misunderstood I'm told I'm not very clear when I speak these days so it's is good enough to want it to have Neverending chapters 😁

ch 0 1 A thousand years inside the void.

Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity

Fantasy · primodial

At this point, the carriages had been connected like the cabins of a train, bound by wood, metal plates, and ropes. Most of all, they had a magical feel to them that made them imposing. This was the World-Traversing Serpent, which would facilitate their movement from here to Blood Rock, the homeland of the Blood Serpent Warlocks. It was magnificent.

Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity

Fantasy · primodial

Rose_Neilsen_0768

2mth

Commented

yes I have a slight problem author!! the chapters they are........too......short 😁😁I know scared you right. seriously though good books need longer chapters for prices were forced to pay. ☹️good so far though keep up the good work 👏

ch 0 1 A thousand years inside the void.

Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity

Fantasy · primodial

Rose_Neilsen_0768

2mth

Commented

and thats different how from today although we have more freedom the treatment is relatively the same and vice versa for men as well these days

During the Dark Ages, women were treated as mere objects.

I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!

Fantasy · DurcalAka

Rose_Neilsen_0768

2mth

Commented

hehe Dumbledore lives

Most noticeably, not only did he sport a majestic mustache, but he also had a voluminous white beard that flowed down to his chest.

I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!

Fantasy · DurcalAka

Rose_Neilsen_0768

3mth

Commented

questions can they make the wings disappear and appear at will or are they a permanent fixture??asking out of curiosity 🤔 not slamming the book just think it would be super awesome if they were at will not fixed

Finally, it was D-day. It was a grand occasion. Alessio and Katherine acted as the hosts while Alexi stayed with the boys. The grand gala unfolded in a breathtaking display of opulence. The venue, a luxurious ballroom adorned with cascading crystal chandeliers and draped in regal shades of purple and gold, set the stage for an evening of sophistication and intrigue.

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy · Realm_Weaver

Rose_Neilsen_0768

3mth

Commented

mm

"Dibs on Goku."

Re:Life: Glitch in the System

Fantasy · Realm_Weaver

Rose_Neilsen_0768

3mth

Commented

finally a brain amongst the bunch of bananas

In simpler terms, the military can use your recipes for their soldiers but they have no right to make any money from it. As for controlling the supply, it is a nice idea but you need to know your limits. You give the military a big discount, so that way, both parties are happy.