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Whitney_Snelson

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2021-05-28 Joined Global

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LoL. I too was going to ask the same thing. But your response was awesome. 😂

That is going to hurt. Ya...so my dumb ass decided last night while I had all that time to myself that I am still, and I say still...still foolish if I thought that Tasnim Stone is mine. So as much as it pains me, I am going to back off again. I can safely say that a second broken heart had made me learned my lesson now.

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Urban · Tatum_Whispers

Whitney_Snelson
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Why is Tasnim constantly referred to as 'he'?

I miss Tasnim. I am not going to lie; I still love him; I have just learned to live without him.

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Urban · Tatum_Whispers

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She's a brunette...

Tasnim, you cock your head when you are thinking. The second that beautiful blonde locks tip to the right, I know you are working something out. Also…your lips move.

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Urban · Tatum_Whispers

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He had seen her at the club, but not really "noticed" her. Then he ran in to her in the alley. Twice. Where does the coffee shop come in to play?

You have taken me on a ride, I am grateful for it, sure it is crushing me that you are not here with me. Everything you have done has made me feel that I can be a better man. You know, the first time something truly rendered me speechless was the first time I saw you. Not the first kiss. No. the moment you walked into that coffee shop, I was shocked to silence. Tasnim, you are breathless and beautiful. Nothing I can offer will equal what you have given me. 

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Forbidden Love: When Two Worlds Collide

Urban · Tatum_Whispers

Whitney_Snelson
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LoL I have no clue what just happened. other than the chapter just repeated the conversation from the beginning of the chapter.
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Wasn't she just going to end it with him? I am SO confused with all this loopiness and jacked up timeline.
Whitney_Snelson
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Huh? Cancer?
Whitney_Snelson
Whitney_Snelson
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Who tf is Kati? Tasnim? Who's also been called Cass. This could be a really great book with some major editing.
Whitney_Snelson
Whitney_Snelson
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Why all of a sudden is Tasnim, Cassandra? 🤨
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Hot. But, pretentious.

"I said 'I shouldn't touch you', not that I won't." His thumb and forefinger grabbed my chin and pulled it high up so I had to look him directly in his eyes "And sweetheart, I can practically feel how turned on you are right now, which, don't get me wrong, is fucking hot. I know if I would take your hand and lead you to my car or yours for that matter, you wouldn't say no."

Only Mine

Only Mine

Urban · Teyci88

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Alright, who's cutting onions? 😭😍😭

Before I knew it, a marker was passed around, and the jersey Michael wore was signed by everyone. I watched these big, clunky, fully geared men approach slowly, talk gently to Michael, and sign his shirt.

Completion

Completion

Urban · Holly S. Roberts

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How are her Docs fitting if she's in Warrior form?

I check behind us. The men wait in a close group, facing away from the water. I don't mention my lack of breasts in this form to King or the total unattractiveness of gaping jaws and deep-set eyes. King is King and I can't change him. I also can't take this itch another second. I lay my rifle aside, unbuckle my pack, and drop it. The amazing boots from Maylin come off next and then my sword and other assorted weapons. Unbuckling the chest straps with Warrior hands takes the longest. The straps hold everything from water to knives to ammo. The added plus is they look really cool. If I must go around with muscles up to my ears and teeth that rival a great white shark, I deserve cool. My clothes are last. The blood is completely covering them so I decide they can join me for a wash, and I'll put on my spares afterward.

Genetically Modified

Genetically Modified

Sci-fi · Holly S. Roberts

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I sure would have liked more detail on this subject. Why the noticable change in Killian? Who was this dude and what about his parties? Or did I miss something?

Killian's tone remained even, but I caught a subtle change. "It's been a long time and I don't see myself there again in the near future."

Completion

Completion

Urban · Holly S. Roberts

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Swoon!!
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He took a deep breath as he watched the sleeping girl. Her face was sticking to papers and books on top of her table. After watching her for a while, he moved closer, picked her up in his arms as gently as possible and slowly carried her out of the room, like a princess

I Love You, Monster: The Blindfolded Wife x The Masked Husband

I Love You, Monster: The Blindfolded Wife x The Masked Husband

Urban · KazzenlX

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