Webnovel Author: Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Posted

First of all the synopsis was good. Short yet intriguing. The characters are well defined but not too described. The entire plot is magnificent. I love how in the action scene you used the right adverbs and words thus not making it cringy.

The Abyss of the Vampire - Demon

Fantasy · Sweetdreamer20

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Commented

NICE READ It's so realistic though it's fantasy

ch 0 4 4. Night creatures

The Abyss of the Vampire - Demon

Fantasy · Sweetdreamer20

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Commented

Jason and Jennifer. Siblings with names that start with J

"Stay away from me, dear sister," Jason spat before he disappeared with the wind.

The Abyss of the Vampire - Demon

Fantasy · Sweetdreamer20

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Commented

He loved a good chase. That's the phrase I love

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The Abyss of the Vampire - Demon

Fantasy · Sweetdreamer20

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to Sweetdreamer20

Thanks for pointing that out.

"I'm home," I call out as I get into the house.

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to Sweetdreamer20

You're right. I'll correct it. Thanks

I get home in a flash only to see my sister's car already parked outside the house.

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to ClaisiceLouice

Your comments are making me be more consistent.

ch 0 9 CHAPTER 9: FAMILY HISTORY

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to ClaisiceLouice

Thank you. I really don't know why I'm just seeing your comments just now. Thanks for your support.

ch 0 7 CHAPTER 7: FIRST TIME OFFENDER

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to ClaisiceLouice

Ur right. Say hello to Nailah

ch 0 5 Chapter 5: I’M NOT A BUGULAR I HAVE MORE CLASS THAN THAT.

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to Sweetdreamer20

It's written in the present tense

ch 0 1 THE TALK

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to Luminous_Arcadian

Thank you for your suggestions. I'll put it in mind.

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to Akira_Monadelle

Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate

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Realistic · Meg_Goodhope

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Replied to novel_lights

You're welcome. Keep up the good work.

Under His Wings

Fantasy · novel_lights

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Posted

The title of your novel 'witch of the throne' stands out. One of the things I like about your novel is the little humour added here and there in parts of the book. I see no problem in the novel based on the chapters I've read but i think the prologue needs to be worked on. Nice read. I recommend this.

Witch of the Throne

Fantasy · yinumlia

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Posted

Honestly, I don't know where you got this idea from. I have never seen anything like this before. If someone had pitched this to me I would have laughed but you are pulling it off. Your synopsis is nice, especially this line "It's grievous when you are being banned from your home just because of seeing the face of who created you". Nice fantasy book. This is a nice read.

Under His Wings

Fantasy · novel_lights

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Posted

"A life to play, a story to fight for, and a game that will never be over." Putting that quote on the cover was a good choice. I must commend your writing style it's unique. This novel is a good read. I suggest you revise the book to make it better though. Nice book though.

Never Over

Urban · ClaisiceLouice

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Posted

I am giving this book 5 stars because there is nothing that I have found wrong about this book. For starters, the book cover is everything, though it's simple it draws you to the book. In my own opinion, this book and its storyline are worth reading.

The Midnight Crime

Fantasy · Jia_K

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Commented

Yo

"Oh yesss harder~" a girl suddenly said from beside me.

Living With Karma

Urban · Akira_Monadelle

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Commented

This makes me want to read more

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Living With Karma

Urban · Akira_Monadelle

Meg_Goodhope

2yr

Commented

Not by nature? Eh, so we talking good witch?

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Witch of the Throne

Fantasy · yinumlia

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