Webnovel Author: Andry_Reyes - Novel Collection

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Posted

It was an enjoyable read. The writing isn't the best but it was enough to keep me reading. There were some phrases that could be rephrased, and some paragraphs could be split to make it reader-friendly, but all of these problems could be fixed by just continuing to write. Other than that, the premise kept me hook and I will definitely come back here for more

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Fantasy · IAmGuavaFruit

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Good start so far. Some paragraphs could be split into more and some better wording, but I'm enjoying it.

ch 0 1 How to Speedrun Life (And Mess up the DLC)

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Fantasy · IAmGuavaFruit

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Omoshiroi

Unfortunately for him, he was now intangible and was unable to grasp any physical object that could stop him from being sucked into the terrifying portal.

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Fantasy · IAmGuavaFruit

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Dying alone is scary...

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Fantasy · IAmGuavaFruit

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Great start so far, but I'd split this paragraph into 2. Readers hate wall of text

Superpower Evolution

Urban · Xiaoru

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

hmmm it's already chapter 10 huh... I swear it was shorter (in a good way of course)

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Realistic · XXXXC

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

5 chapters in and it's a good so far. The writing quality isn't perfect(although nothing is flawless) I want see an improvement with the writing quality.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : I Found My Answer

The Love of Imperatrix

Urban · Devanshi_Rathod

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

I'm loving this so far! And uhh... try to split those long paragraphs. Wall of text isn't appealing to readers.

ch 0 5 The First Opponent

Sparror Volume 1

Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Hmm... Kinda resembles the setting of Big Hero 6. The word choice is a bit iffy here tho

Sparror Volume 1

Fantasy · JJ_Prakoso

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Character design definitely one of this novel's strong point.

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Realistic · XXXXC

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Well, that's a questionable desire, but I wanna see what happens lol

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Realistic · XXXXC

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Replied to XXXXC

MHHMMMM

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Realistic · XXXXC

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

hmm

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Realistic · XXXXC

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Posted

Hmm... this is quite the read. will definitely read it till the end. The plot is intriguing enough, and so are the characters. I'm not particularly a big fan of the overly casual writing at times, and some phrases and sentences needs a rewrite. I'd like to see a deeper side to the characters and just overall improvement to the quality... basically, I'm saying I want more lol. Anyways, good read.

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LGBT+ · callmeotooosan

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Replied to Andry_Reyes

so far*

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LGBT+ · callmeotooosan

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

one more chap and I'm about to finish... good read so fat

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LGBT+ · callmeotooosan

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

3 more chapter and I'm done reading this lol... An entertaining book so far

ch 0 7 Chapter 6: Flowers

Adam: The Vagabond

Fantasy · King_Noran

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Good start... a bit too casual with the writing in my personal opinion, and the word choice could be improved, but definitely a good read so far.

ch 0 1 You can only have 2D friends if you want to be a Mafia Boss

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LGBT+ · callmeotooosan

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Replied to callmeotooosan

hmmm... I see. I'm still working on how to flow better, so I'll definitely consider this

I've arrived at my haven! Now all I have to do is order the usual and sit on my throne!

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Fantasy · Andry_Reyes

Andry_Reyes

2yr

Commented

Well, this was quite the rollercoaster. Felt a little script-like at times, but it's a good start

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Adam

Adam: The Vagabond

Fantasy · King_Noran

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