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Rita_152

Rita_152

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2021-06-20 Joined United States

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Its been a year since ive entered a new entry and thats for a purpose, we have been upgrading our equipment and increasing our contingency plans, we even came up with a name for our group, "Chaos Command" is what we chose as for why its because were a chaotic bunch from many different worlds but our goal is the same, find a world where we can take command and live peacefully.

World Devouring System

World Devouring System

Sci-fi · JustLetMeSleep

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That's what Terraria requires for most materials, you get used to it.

Setting it alight, I was then allowed to start smelting my ores, with a ratio of 4 Ore to 1 Ingot.

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Reincarnated as the Only Human

Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu

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If intercourse was only about bonds, wouldn't that have been the better choice considering how Tyrus already has several close friends?
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Shouldn't his MP be empty?
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Hopefully our MC doesn’t get world-destroying powers just from this.

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Supreme Simple System

Supreme Simple System

Fantasy · Viadhivan_Ranata

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How big is she?

Purple light illuminated from within my body and my heart was racing. I could feel my body changing as I activated [True dragon]. From outside the circle the white light which blinded them was overtaken by my mystic purple glow and once the light stopped shining everyone could see my dragon form.

I reincarnated from a nobody to a.. dragon?

I reincarnated from a nobody to a.. dragon?

Fantasy · W_D_Y_W_F_M

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"No way. What about a spoon?" The pen transformed into a black metal spoon.

I reincarnated from a nobody to a.. dragon?

I reincarnated from a nobody to a.. dragon?

Fantasy · W_D_Y_W_F_M

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Here’s your room :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

{Told you to search. And maybe aim for the 1S 50C inn without a meal. With that, you only need 16 smiles.}

The dragon's harem

The dragon's harem

Fantasy · Alen_Tanor

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A negligible difference. There’s a reason Pokémon natures modify stats by 10% rather than a fixed value. In case you were wondering, a Pokémon with an impish nature has +10% Defense and -10% Special Attack.
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So Bekka is now a battle maniac? Who she was before was far more interesting.
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First Demonic Dragon

First Demonic Dragon

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

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Then perhaps “reduces mana regeneration by 10% of base value while active” would be clearer.

[Hair Suit (LVL.MAX): A skill specific to Althea Magna. When you equip the Hair Suit your hair/muscle mass increases and all physical skills get doubled. |Cost: 10% mana per second when equipped.|]

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

Fantasy · SleepnSweets

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"I can at least hold a pan and smash it to their face, right?"

The Villain's Little Cat

The Villain's Little Cat

Sci-fi · Sorahana

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I don't care how fast your mana regeneration is, you can't keep up something that expensive for long

[Hair Suit (LVL.MAX): A skill specific to Althea Magna. When you equip the Hair Suit your hair/muscle mass increases and all physical skills get doubled. |Cost: 10% mana per second when equipped.|]

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

Fantasy · SleepnSweets

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Michelle is probably going to revive like Hailey did, and I doubt Hailey is gone for good. After all, what's the narrative payoff for killing off characters we barely know? If you want to make a character death impactful, the reader should have an emotional attachment to said character. Besides, killing off not one but two potential MCs so quickly will incentivize readers to detach themselves from the characters throughout the world you're building.
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Did this Earth's mass increase or just its size? A substantial increase in the planet's mass would mess with the delicate balance of its solar system. And if this is meant to be a parallel Earth, the increased gravity would cause the moon to be slowly ripped apart as it falls to the planet below, causing increasingly extreme tides and eventually earthquakes as it approaches.

This wasn't all; the vampire invasion brought a mutation to the world—the world grew several times its size due to the overflow of Aether from the rifts, and in doing so, it brought a mutation to the Earth's natural metals. These metals channel the aether smoothly, giving humanity hope and a way to fight back.

Vampire Progenitor’s Daughter

Vampire Progenitor’s Daughter

Sci-fi · Reacix

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