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MathisPeals

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Follow me on Twitter, @MathisPeals. I will be talking about Anime, Manga, Games, and at times Sports. I also follow back.

2021-06-23 Joined Global

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Author Here. --- This story isn't the most unique or have the best writing on this app-site. But I can admit that I tried, and that I try to put out the best quality that I can. --- I want to talk about the story itself, of course no spoilers. The first chapter is a long one. At least it was for me. The first draft was 1,856 words. The second-draft went to 2,000 words. After constant editing, it has well-exceeded 5000+ words. But I guess that it was a crucial step in building the world and characters around Yuujin (MC). --- The second thing I want to confront. This story is not focused solely on the Main Character. From reading many stories on this platform, I realize that most story tend to focus heavily on the main character. When writing this, I envisioned a novel where the story-plot can work without the main character actually being in the chapter or serving as a support character during certain 'characters' chapters or even arcs. It's also a chance to build the world they're living in. I went through the history of this world, being a blend from reality and fiction, it was easier on me than I thought. I started from the 70s, re-wrote some things, created characters crucial to the story today, and went as far as creating small towns, big cities, a money system, power system, their allies, and their government. There will be a-lot of foreshadowing they won't make sense until (way) further into the story. But I do feel proud in the work that I put into my characters and world. --- Lastly, I want to mention that I won't be producing as many chapters as... let's say 7-10 chapters a week. Simply put, I'm built like that. Not only do I want to focus on the actual story and to produce the best quality possible. There's the fact that I am both a procrastinator and not that fast of a writer. JKSManga for example. He's a fast writer, and can produce multiple chapters for multiple stories in a week. That's insane. I know that I won't be releasing chapters with 5000+ words often, but I will try to stay consistent with the word count and quality. --- I would also like to mention that I am not confident on my writing. I'm still searching for my writing style, and I want to focus on the story being a easy read, while also allowing everyone to immerse themselves into the story. I have read an incredible amount of books, but I'm not sure if any of that will translate to my novel. Hopefully, I can improve as a writer throughout this series. If you read this entire review. Thank you. Also, follow me on Twitter and (maybe) Instagram, I haven't made an Instagram yet. @MathisPeals.
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The oldest is like 31 or 32 for him. Not uncle age at all.

He remembered today was the 5th of August, in the year 2139. It couldn't possibly be April of 2129, the year he was still attending university.

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God

Video Games · Lucky Old Cat

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Guys, it's simple. His father's bipolar, not psychotic.

So, Derek asked his father to let him join a dojo and learn martial arts. To his surprise, he did not have to beg nor even ask twice.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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Zeke or Finral??????
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Gustav's mother took in and conceived another boy when he was close to being eight years old. The same boy was only two when he awakened a high-grade bloodline. Gustav's parents were so joyful that they totally ignored Gustav and gave all their love and attention to his junior brother. He loved his brother, so he never hated, but it wasn't the other way around, "Why do I have trash like you as my big brother?"

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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Blond hair? Parents disappointed because they didn't create the powerful child they always wanted? Yeah... Gustav is an alias. I know who you really are.
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Gustav's parents were extremely disappointed when he awakened his bloodline. Gustav, who was only six years at that time, noticed his parents' attitude towards him changed for the worse. All the love and care that they had been displaying since his birth disappeared. Sometimes they would not remember to feed him throughout the day, and whenever he complained of hunger, "USELESS TRASH! YOU ONLY KNOW HOW TO EAT!" His parents would shout at him with contempt.

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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And this... Is how my family abandoned me.
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Unfortunately, Gustav awakened an evolved bloodline that was the most useless in the history of evolved bloodlines. He could only manipulate his hair to change color.

The Bloodline System

The Bloodline System

Fantasy · TimVic

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Some can open their eyes much sooner. They can even attempt it on the first day. But they won't be able to see anything, since it'll all be blurry.

Despite being all wrapped up, Derek tried to mimic all of her movements, step after step, memorizing every single detail he could grasp, no matter how small.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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Replied to A_RANDOM_BOSS
No need to look!!!
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Derek was ecstatic, and not only because this world had magic, but also because as soon as he heard the word Ekidu, he had felt something clicking inside of him.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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The stunned Ju-Hui stumbled backwards before falling on her rear.

Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling)

Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling)

Magical Realism · 추공 (Chugong)

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"Well, it's not like I'll be able to continue blocking my nose in Jeju Island, so..."

Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling)

Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling)

Magical Realism · 추공 (Chugong)

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※Warning: Incompletion of Daily Quests will result in appropriate levels of punishment.

Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling)

Only I Level Up (Solo Leveling)

Magical Realism · 추공 (Chugong)

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Here, the day continues the same as every day for this person. Masturbating his dick rapidly up and down, hoping for something to come out.

Thot hunting System

Thot hunting System

Realistic Fiction · IamHazzard

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