Webnovel Author: Benny_Manatee - Novel Collection

Probably will be. Glad you like the story!

I'm not trying to start a fight either, I just tend to reply in the same style as the critique/comment/whatever. First and foremost, this is a story with superpowers. It's not that it's only about that, rather that aspect is just the means to an end. Characters have a single superpower, that they can manipulate in certain ways. I don't want to spoil anything from later on, but there's a secondary system, but that's not about having a power, rather using your own body in certain ways, according to what you're good at. In that sense, no it's not his only skill. Furthermore, most characters are quite 'creative' with how they use their abilities, thus making them a bit more colorful. But then again, that's the opinion of the author. Take that as you will. And as I said, go ahead, read it until chapter 40, it's free, and if you liked it, go ahead and read more. If you don't like it after that, you don't have to, but please do remember, that I started writing with this work. In the first 40 chapters it shows a lot how inexperienced I was, and after that, I like to think that the quality gets way better. If your problem was only with the premise, tell me, I'll try to figure out a way to make it more appealing.

Look, to each his own. If you don't wanna read it, don't. If you do, go for it. Saying that a story is dull, before giving it a read is kinda arrogant, or naive. Can't decide. Don't mean to be rude, just judging you based on a comment.

Thanks for your constructive criticism! Really do appreciate it!

I'm gonna update the synopsis, I guess lol There's nothing of that sort really planned. MC does Temptation in other ways, and usually doesn't use his powers to tempt anyone into his bed.

All in all, thanks for the review.

There's tgis thing called pacing. Im trying to hold back as much info as possible, until needed, or shouls be hinted at. I agree with most that you said, but i dont recall a second where Dan was trusting, at least in the beginning.