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Hey! you forgot about the love triangle between Shenoy, Vinay, and Vathi. Karan's twist. Smrithi hints. So much... But very interesting... I think Author is blessed with twists in the brain.🤓😎🧐🥳🥳🤠🤫🤭🤗

I liked the book teaser and trailer too... Leaves us with many questions... a good remix of music background effects...

Yeah

Please. Make sure that you have to write 100000 words... Otherwise everything is good

Yeah... Exactly

Agreed

Oh! No... it's interesting..read further you will understand. The first two chapters are not confusing. Yet characters are in confusion. Because vathi has exams..they got a crisp idea from her.. After they start reading Vathi's book they all will get clarity. Even we as readers... As you said there is a zig-zag but the main base of the story is how Vathi. Will fill also zig-zag with help of others. I understood everything to the point...

I liked the plot. It is simple but with interesting concepts like hacking death mystery, suspense, and a love triangle. Congrats on receiving promising work for WSA week 6. I'll add it to the library... Further, the base is strong where there is confusion about who hacked Vathi's laptop Shenoy, Karen, or Vinay? The hint questions are going to be twisted in further story development as I guess. Every character had no clarity of what happened in Vathi's life until she narrated and wrote a book after the completion of her exams. From chapter 3 we will start getting clarity but with good twists. Even there is a lot of Indian cultures but there are effects of British, Portuguese culture too because of names of people and places referred to. These kinds of books are rare to find here. Nice Author... Continue you might get a contract. All the 👍 [img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]

Yeah! The novel might get a contract. As you said the things are going fast. But we can understand everything clearly. I guess that Smrithi's hint questions are going to increase the story length with more twists... Only thing Author should continue quality and quantity.[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins]

Agreed with you!