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Lazormenot
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2021-07-16 Joined GlobalBadges 4
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2yr
Commented I like the concept! Hope to see new chapter
ch 0 3 Chapter 3: First load
Death Game Dating System
Urban · DXHaseoXD
2yr
Commented you could write (Hello host,) instead of putting 2 commas in one sentence
The voice once again sounded in his mind, "Hello, host, you have been chosen for the Doki Doki Dating System as the Goddess of Love has felt sorry for you after looking over your life. Before the system issues a quest, please save your current state as a precaution."
Death Game Dating System
Urban · DXHaseoXD
2yr
Commented You could write suddenly appeared but it's good
Lin Fan had been sitting in front of his computer playing his favourite dating sim when he suddenly heard this voice in his head. The worst thing was that he was at the best part when this voice suddenly sounded.
Death Game Dating System
Urban · DXHaseoXD
Lazormenot
God Rank Isn't For Me!
Sci-fi · Lazormenot