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Okay, I cried.

Maybe you should increase the difficulty. And make a more satisfying ending, and that has to be little by little, the other was very quick and easy. He should get used to the new lives a little bit, like his daughter or something, and when he wakes up, not remembering them well, he'll feel an emptiness in his chest. Conflicts, you know?(Google Translate)

And I loved!

He'll be Jesus?!

Great!

The final was great!

Thank you for all~!

Thank you for the late birthday present~!

Thank you for the chapter!

Man of the house is similar. Just, please, do different thinghs and I will love this. Thank you for the story!

Masterpiece!

Did you drop this fanfiction? But it is one of the most impresive naruto fanfiction that I have read.

If we go back at the beginning of the story, when Will and Jane met, it is said that in the future Jane would write in her biography that that meeting changed her life. The tiredness at the Oscar party, the main actor waving to Will and Jane saying it was because he respected their relationship or something, and the strange behavior. If she is cheating on him, I think it might have something to do with that old harem etiquette. But I think he would forgive her according to that future biography. Actually, the system had said something about harem when he came up, but it was just an idea of the system and not an obligation. The truth is that if Jane cheats on Will, I hope he won't even look her in the face or allow her to act in his movies.

But it is also a cliche now.

Please, more!!!

There are some words changed and wrote wrong, but I think it is understandable.

I found the dialogue a little unnatural, especially in the part where he was fired. The protagonist so far hasn't been very "human" or relatable, but he has potential! Do your best author! (Google Translate)