Webnovel Author: Adrain_Garcia - Novel Collection

Kael's Character Design

Elsi Character design

Xavier Character Design

Alex Character Design

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😅😅 I just saw it while scrolling down that's how I responded it this late. Anyway I just had to say something even if you didn't wanted to drag this any longer 🧐

And about the stuttering... you know Ross, from FRIENDS, right? If you get a chance try to notice that before he asks something or wants to declare something... he would stutter in the beginning. Yes, not all the time but for that reference please take notice of how Hinata from Naruto talks. She stutters but when speaking it out loud, it doesn't seem to be noticeable but rather cute, but when it's turned to writing it can be turned into something that might look weird. And for that, I am still trying to find something on how to express the feeling.

He is still doubtful about them. Plus he must be feeling hesitant... it's like when you came to realize you have a phobia and telling it to your parents sometimes can be tricky. Not always but a child still feels hesitant at times...

Yeah, even I came to understand that part... later on. I tried to elaborate the characters in more detail in the future but still needs improvement. Thanks for the heads up!

I am sorry if you aren't finding the mc interesting... At this point, I can't do anything about it. Plus since it's my first try, I tried to make it look more interactive since I was starting to think that the mc is just rambling on in one situation. And personally, if you think that mc is being impatient then what would you have done if you were one day woke up on an island with only a handful of people you know...? Even if we consider, no, I make him look smart this still doesn't mean that he will be entirely fine with every situation. It takes time to adjust to new surroundings. So I would really appreciate it if you could overlook things ... but at the end of the day, I am still improving so thanks for letting me know your views on this!