IzIm

4d

Posted

it’s just not for me, there’s not much power building more plot building, the mc being a kid lasts practically the whole story .

IzIm

5d

Commented

nooo a cliff hanger 😭 i’m looking forward to the next chapters of her evolution ![img=update]

ch 98 Chapter 98 - Final Stretch

IzIm

5d

Posted

author ur marvel fic is amazing i hope the best for u and wish for future chapters in it 😊

IzIm

5d

Commented

author please update more i love this fanfic sm 😣

ch 97 Chapter 97 - Easy Victory

IzIm

5d

Posted

love it so far but i wish they updated more it’s so good

IzIm

1mth

Posted

this is terrible, it has such a great concept but is completely ruined by… everything. The mc is forced to be a contracted monster to a noble girl, he had no choice in it but never thought it was odd? he then doesn’t question a thing she asks and is like a fucking docile puppy? i don’t understand the point in making a MONSTER mc, NOTHUMAN!! ruined the whole thing

IzIm

3mth

Commented

thank you for the chapter, i hope all is well so ur able to keep writing this great fanfic [img=update][img=update]

ch 48 Secret Feature, Colossus, Confession

As my sister finished speak I was about to respond when I felt a soft tickle on, something... I turned back to look and what I saw shocked me. Two sets of wings adorned my back, one a complete gold and white mixture the most holy wings you would expect from an angel... The other was pitch black with specks of crimson along the edges. The white wings sat just above the pitch black ones, the wings twitching and slightly flapping every time I willed them to move. It was strange, weird even, I could just move them by thinking much like you will a hand to move

Reality Bender System, Marvel

Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds

IzIm

3mth

Commented

nice

['Synthetikinesis', The ability to blend different powers, abilities, spells and innates. 'Celestial Blood Bond', The ability to create a blood connection with a target person, host can choose: Servant Bond or Lover Bond.]

Reality Bender System, Marvel

Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds

IzIm

3mth

Posted

this story is just bad, it gets boring after 20 chapters and is terrible at plot progression. Seriously .. it’s all over the place, every chapter something new is happening and not in a good way.

The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

Movies · StarWaves

IzIm

5mth

Posted

**SOME SPOILERS BELOW BEWARE^**⚠️ Honestly it’s a great book, some issues here and there but I had to drop it at chapter 200. The main character and thena have a child, a boy, which becomes the new Mc. Which then just focuses on drama and gwen, his love interest. The main character pluto became too human for my liking, which is not surprising as the chapters progres there’s not much action, mainly drama, timeline progression and slice of life. He had a lot of potential to become stronger and actually focus on defeating the celestial, yet his character development and progression stops there, which is extremely unfortunate because it would’ve been more entertaining seeing him interact with the current timeline hero’s. So, overall this was a pretty disappointing read considering how far I got but anything before chapter 120 was a good read I suppose 🤷‍♂️

Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Movies · mark_kiple

IzIm

5mth

Commented

please don’t.

and I think I know what I'm going to do with this book now. at first, I was just going for the typical op mc, face-slapping, edgelord fanfic that is rampant in this site, but now... I'm thinking about a more tone-down version, where the MC learns what it means to be human again, as compared to his long life now, he's only human for like... 20 years or so... I mean, we don't even remember shit that happens when we were a toddler, let alone this...

Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal

Movies · mark_kiple

IzIm

5mth

Posted

The concept of my two favorite things, tower climbing with an op non-human mc, yet it somehow got ruined in every way. The dialogue is so cringe i think it did genuine physical damage. The way the Mc talks is unnecessary and the use of fancy words is repetitive and consumes most of the chapters. While the plot is bland and goes in one direction, there’s barley anything known about the Mc even though he’s immortal, you think there’d be some background right? but nope, same goes for side characters or relations, a robotic story with no real progression. So overall, i’ve gained permanent frown lines from the intense frowning and my hopes crushed on a waste of this true potential story design! So unless you’re an edgelord don’t read this ⚠️[img=angry]

Crimson Tower

Fantasy · HaozDancer

IzIm

5mth

Replied to Crocodile9

it’s so forced 😬

"Oh, this is an exhilarating dance of agony!" he cackled maniacally, his voice dripping with both delight and madness. "A symphony of pain and ecstasy, swirling within me like a tempest! It's been an eternity since I've savored such exquisite torture!"