Webnovel Author: VamV - Novel Collection

So, I was thinking of reading up to five chapters and then giving it a proper review. But, I didn't count for two things, the chapters to be this long and the fact that I am a lazy reader. Here is the new deal, I will still read up to 5 chapters, but more slowly and commenting in each chapter, and at the end I will give a proper review of the story. First chapter, not my cup of tea, I admit. I tend to prefer lighter things in general, but I like varying, so I'll try reading with an open mind here. I liked the narration and the descriptions, they work for me and succeed in communicating the gruesome and dark vibes and emotions of the scenes. An element I didn't like was the repeat of the motivations of the protagonist, nothing wrong with the character itself and her motivations, but she explained her motivations through thought three times in the first chapter, that was kinda unnecessary. I liked the protagonist and characters reactions such as her desperate struggle for life, the emotion at the hug, the dark-haired guy and his "nice" killing and confrontation. That's good characterization, keep with it. Overall, it's pretty good, the only element that I think could be improved I already mentioned, I kinda would have preferred not knowing about her now, and focus more on the visceral reactions, but that is more personal than objective.