WhiteWarlock

4mth

Commented

The grammar is going to kill me...But Im still reading until the story stops being entertaining.

I said as I feel lonely and disappointed how the game will end. The game where everyone can do anything and decided everuthing. A game where the player been given a freedom to do as they pleased.

WhiteWarlock

4mth

Commented

You could put this through chat got to check for corrections or simply ask it to improve grammar and sentence structure, and revise a bit more from there.

He said with a chuckle as we started chatting as I can heared that [Monochrome_God] is yawning.

WhiteWarlock

4mth

Commented

o of. The Grammar....At least use a grammar checking software like Grammarly, its absolutely free. If not, stiff like word or google docs has some minor grammer checking capabilities. The story premise is so good, but the grammar is killing it. Please author, if you could, use some grammar checking software.

"Long time not see too, [Monochrome_God]. It's been about three years, hasn't it?" I greeted him back.

WhiteWarlock

6mth

Commented

Amazing, keep it up!

And give me a review! It's the least you can do!

WhiteWarlock

6mth

Commented

Que?

"~and more respectful~" Gojo ruffled Robin's hair before walking past them

WhiteWarlock

6mth

Commented

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Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Commented

A force...intetesting.

he taunted me as he rushed to me once again. but now he compensates his strength by utilizing an unknown force that creates 'compressed air' that buffers his attacks and limits my movement.

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Commented

Tang Li Xue slapped the back of Elder Lin's head hard with her [Bad Luck Sticker] made it stuck on Elder Lin's back head!

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Commented

"But my scroll shows that… wait what did you just call me?!"

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Commented

'It seems he wasn't trying to trick me,' thought Su Wan.

Demonic Dragon Reincarnation: I am contracted by a sexy lord

Fantasy · Nefarian

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Commented

Cheng Cheng? whats that supposed to mean?

F-Class hero Slime, E-Class hero Lizardman, D-class hero Frost Goblin, Chengcheng.

Demonic Dragon Reincarnation: I am contracted by a sexy lord

Fantasy · Nefarian

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Replied to Bardok32123

Yep same

"It was a shame how he carried on🎵."

WhiteWarlock

7mth

Commented

Question: can ghosts canonically do that? Heal someone besides their guardian I mean. I thought a ghost was bound to their guardian and could not use their paracausal energy on others but only the guardian they are connected to.

He held up a hand and a little… Thingy blurred to life, its sides spinning slowly as its light-bulb face lit up. She flinched, surprised at the sudden brightness, and it spoke, voice calm and soothing, "Don't worry, little one. I'm not going to hurt you."