Martyrous

19h

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so he may place it in sufficiently inconvenient spots for Harkon to stub his toes.

Martyrous

19h

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The quote in proper English is "Only in death does duty end." I'd use a paragraph comment, but ever since they updated the mobile app UI, I haven't been able to make them on my phone. Otherwise, besides that great job, the story is really good, and honestly, the naysayers can find something else to read if they don't like it instead of being a bunch of nagging Nancy's and saying how much they don't like the story without giving any constructive criticism as to why they don't like it. And even then, it's you, the "author's" story, not the "readers" story. You shouldn't have to cater to our whims if you don't want to, and if someone doesn't like what you wrote, they can just stop reading and find a different story to read.

ch 166 Farewell Warhammer...

Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System

War · Lee_Kah

Martyrous

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Chapter 29 - Just A Heart Warming Family Vacation. No One Is Harmed In The Creation Of This Chapter

I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God

Anime & Comics · Daoist_KittyKat

Martyrous

5d

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here's an idea a perfect way to use the "Christmas skill" would be to create a Sub-Class skill. You can balance it out by having the sub-class equipped only provide a certain percentage of the stats and reduced effectiveness of class abilities/skills it would have when equipped as the primary class while also reducing the XP of both classes by splitting it between the two(a debuff basically for the sub-class's basic stats and linked skills/abilities to let's say 40% normal state/effectiveness and splitting XP gains 65% to the primary and 35% to the Sub-class). It would still be OP if you had your highest level class equipped as the sub class.

ch 0 4 The Assassination

The Overpowered Gamer (Harry Potter)

Video Games · Percypendragon3

Martyrous

6d

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there's a timeline FBI that goes after people who change how things are supposed to happen in Marvel, so technically, there's an FBI that goes after reincarnator's when they change things.

But I'm hesitant because of my mental age... hope there isn't an inter-dimensional fbi that goes after reincarnators. But seriously what am I going to do, my feelings for her are developing as well... my mental age shouldn't matter.

Spider-Man Mayhem

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Martyrous

6d

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some people are just unredeemable monsters that don't deserve to live, and from what I've read, so far, these "parents" deserve a fate worse than death as their are some lines you don't cross. Child abuse and even worse abusing your own flesh and blood child over and over again is an act of malevolence that only a heartless demon would commit.

One time the abuse got so bad they locked me in a closet for a few days and let me almost starve to death for days. They went around telling everyone I had ran away from home and put on this pity party. When they finally let me out they put on this big show, to show everyone they cared. Honestly I hate them with a passion.

Spider-Man Mayhem

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Martyrous

7d

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+1

Star Wars

Skyrim: A Reincarnator's Journey

Video Games · ISpyExp

Martyrous

7d

Commented

+1

Baldurs Gate 3

Skyrim: A Reincarnator's Journey

Video Games · ISpyExp

Martyrous

7d

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I mean, every other author on web novel uses their stones on themselves, so you might as well

ch 0 5 Chapter 5

Skyrim: A Reincarnator's Journey

Video Games · ISpyExp

Martyrous

7d

Commented

ch 240 Chapter XLIV: Movarth

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Martyrous

9d

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+1

A. Space Marines which some of my viewer is wanting about, Sister of Battle and *sigh* Tau without the ethereal caste as the ethereal is destroyed and commander Farsight is available.

Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System

War · Lee_Kah

Martyrous

10d

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it's important that their is a difference between what is good and evil and what is considered right and wrong or lawful and unlawful if you want to word it that way. One can be the most "goodest" Saint of them all and be a criminal in the eyes of the law, while an absolute evil might be a perfectly law-abiding individual. light doesn't mean right, and the darkness doesn't make you the one in the wrong. History has plenty of fools with hero complexes doing what they felt they needed to for what they considered the greater good, only for it to backfire on them and end horribly for everyone involved and vilians who have done horrendous and unforgivable things in the pursuit of their goals that have helped propel humanity into a golden age of progress and prosperity. My point is that not everything is black and white. Sometimes, you have to stop and look for the gray lining where good and evil meets and becomes neutral chaos and brings about much needed change.

I mean sure, they seem to worship me, and are Evil. Some may even say monstrous. But their core personality seems to have been kept intact… right?'

Take Eldritch surveys! Noted!

Anime & Comics · Lilith_Zenon

Martyrous

12d

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his mother, too, now lol.

Theo: For you, always, Oka-san.

Reincarnation in dxd with some wishes

Anime & Comics · emir_adar

Martyrous

12d

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Lol, I knew this was coming as soon as MC asked to be Rias's twin brother....

When I wake up in the morning, I feel a weight on me. Ah, Rias is lying on top of me again. Initially, I used to push her off my bed because she was disturbing my comfort, but I've gotten used to it by now. Waking up with a sweet girl every day isn't so bad after all.

Reincarnation in dxd with some wishes

Anime & Comics · emir_adar

Martyrous

13d

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So far, the story is very good. However, if I were to give any sort of advice, it would be to either find someone to review your writing to proofread and help polish your grammar or use an online service that does the same thing like Grammarly it's just a matter of preference on which to go with on the other hand you could do what some authors do and have the readers make use of paragraph comments to point out grammar errors and improve your writing skills that way.

Starting a new faction in the Halo universe with StarCraft Technology

Video Games · Mastar_Chef

Martyrous

13d

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Dunmer Shenanigans at its finest 👌

ch 236 Chapter XL: Mephala's Reward

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Martyrous

13d

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I assume by constellations they are talking about true galactic level power house gods and not the wannabe God's currently on earth. (minus Shiva and the two Dragon God's Big Red and Ophis. they certainly qualify as, at least early to mid level galactic power house's.)

Igor wasn't clear on the full capabilities of ki yet since all the book said was that harnessing the energy would allow him to gain the power to kill constellations. The term 'constellations' alone confused him since he had no clue what constellations were or what they represented.