mlg_camphard18

8mth

Replied to Serenity7Seven

listening to the book makes those "----------" agonizing to listen to. dash dash dash dash dash dash dash dash dash. ugh.

(Scene Break)

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

mlg_camphard18

11mth

Posted

very good book, I enjoyed reading it. I would recommend others to as well

Reborn in Twilight as a Werebear

Movies · Anomander_Adaar

mlg_camphard18

1yr

Commented

Thoughts so far on the novel is this: The author needs to work on his verbs and sentence structure so it reads nice. Correct punctuation needs a little work. Using more descriptive words would make the world and MC clearer than what it has been. MC come across as cold and emotionless. It feels like I'm reading a documentary written by a person who was just getting the main points of the person interviewing the person the book was about. I can understand the main points, but its hard to read when every other sentence has word flow issues or incorrectly structured sentences. I like the book and the idea and story it's trying to convey is entertaining. keep up the writing author and try to keep grinding until you polish out your writing style [img=recommend]

ch 0 6 6.HEART TEMPERING

The Tales Of Divine Sun Dragon

Eastern · Eclipse_Moon25

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Replied to Warmaisach

damn, author is aggressive. rawr xD

ch 1230 Chapter 1230 – Strength

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

nice

Magnus stood up in his seat, "WHAT? What do you mean? You're just 69,"

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

fuck cliffhangers. thanks for the chapter!

ch 157 157. Onoki's BIG Mistake

Naruto: Child of Chakra [COMPLETE]

Anime & Comics · MisterImmortal

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Replied to deadimp

read the rest of the books by this author. this is ties into one of the other ones. can't remember if it origins or harrypotter in the apocalyptic world.

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Replied to asaade_ragnarokm

you haven't read his other books then. all of authors books are amazing

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Posted

best series of books ever. I've read all the books and happy that I found this author. If you're ever lucky enough to find the books, read all of them in order. you won't regret it.

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

I wanna know what happened to the blind kid

"I wonder how they will all react, Last time they saw me I was crippled and I looked weak and wrinkly, The look on their faces when I come back from the dead to haunt them will be priceless." Jacob laughed to himself. "I don't really care for revenge, but will I make my family die in vain? I don't even know where my father is, but I'm not sad. I'm just living my life….and it feels good.

Ms Universe System

Sci-fi · LeftPinky

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

"Ah, the ability to distort space. Not many possess it, but never get near any Vampire that you see having weird, blue-colored eyes, those bastards can distort your head and make it explode from the inside out… They're hard to handle…" -Anonymous Vampire Hunter.

Epic of Vampire Dragon: Reborn As A Vampire Dragon With a System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

"Papa's roar… Mightiest!" said Erebus.

Epic of Vampire Dragon: Reborn As A Vampire Dragon With a System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

The Skeleton Priest evolved into a Skeleton High Priest and then into a Skeleton Saint, it was a strange Skeleton variant with the power of healing and light magic with him. After evolving into a Skeleton Saint, it gained large white robes and a pope hat, alongside a golden staff. Skeleton Saint became an SS-Rank.

Epic of Vampire Dragon: Reborn As A Vampire Dragon With a System

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

mlg_camphard18

2yr

Commented

a lot of the authors paragraphs don't glow well. like "4years of younger" in the previous chapter. if you didn't grow up with English then it's gonna be hard to sound the flow out.

"Noah, it's time for bed." Lari approached me, then without sitting next to me on the couch, even telling me that it is time for bed, do you sit next to me like that?