Kueni - Profile

I like this story from the bit I read specifically chapter 2, you have fun little dialogue, and the writing style is something I'm familiar, since I also started that way, I see keep on writing using dialogue if you want, it makes the story very unique, but if you want to change it that's also an option you could take, either way keep writing.

I will take that advice and make it a thing then since I've been told that once, but all and all I can't wait to review your series.

I really do believe my story could go somewhere and that with a little push and support that I've worked towards it could get a decent audience, I like the direction I took this series and hope to continue!

Fun story, I enjoyed the first chapter and the chemistry between the two characters first introduced, I hope you continue to write fun little banter between the characters.

Great start so far, I believe your story will pick up next coming chapters, hopefully the family doesn't go through any sort of serious conflict with one another, and massive drama break through in the process.

The book has a well detailed start, and only a few chapters, I and hopefully more readers will look forward to more, I see where this romance, fantasy takes off.

The beginning chapters have some real setup, I also feel bad for Peter and the others for how hard the orphanage is. Hopefully Peter will find a way out of his situation there.

Fun read, although the beginning chapter was kind of depressing, I hope the MC gets through the ordeal he's in, and secondly good job giving detail on the characteristics of the MC and subverting expectation!