AtreusRaven - Profile

I didn't expect much, but the story is really amazing. Large chapters, high quality writing, interesting mc, world with lots of details, everything to be a great novel.

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A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere

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