Webnovel Author: Giana_San - Novel Collection

So far I am absolutely pleased. The plot and world setting are intriguing, and that way of words! It feels so smooth and satisfying reading this, like when you slice butter with a hot knife! (It was the first thing that came to mind). Reading this gave me a lot of inspiration to work on my own story too so I'm grateful. I absolutely recommend this to everyone!

Hi hi, Author san here! The story has only 16 chapters as I'm writing this, best believe things will improve! As the genre says, this is an eastern fantasy even tho it might not seem like one at the beginning. It will be more visible once the story progress more. Feel free to asks if you have any questions related to the story! Stability of Updates - I don't see a problem here, I think I'm doing well enough. Story Development - Need to work a bit harder on that one. The later chapters (ch 15-16) get a bit slower but I'm working on improving that. Writing quality - Still trying to improve my way of writing as I progress with the story but I believe I'm on a good path and that it shows in the later chapters. Character design - I think it's decent, I really love to design my own characters. World background is another thing that I'll be improving, feels like it lacks a lot of creativity and shows what everyone has already seen. Just you wait for when I add new locations for everyone to explore~

A great novel with lots of potential worth reading. A do enjoy the character development, story is well paced and keeps the reader engaged. Keep up the good work

A truly enjoyable story. The start did a great job of captivating me and forcing me to read more and more. The idea of the story is pretty cool with some interesting characters and your way of wording is very pleasant, keep up the good work!

Thank you! This made me really happy!

Thank you!!

Only 3 chapters are out as I'm writing this and so far I'm loving it. I love your way with words. There are a few grammar mistakes but they aren't necessarily bad enough to take away the good experience of reading this story. The descriptions of characters are well written too. I believe this piece is more than decent for a first attempt at writing and I believe it is worth for everyone's time.

A great novel with lots of potential worth reading. A do enjoy the character development, story is well paced and keeps the reader engaged. I recommend.

I love the way this novel goes. It's pretty decent and has a unique vibe. People gotta try reading this. I can guarantee that you won't be disappointed.

A nice throwback to the my childhood. Definitely give this a read the progression so far has been great and I hope it keeps on going that way.