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Joe_jo_3480

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I'm reading words. and I like that.

2021-11-07 Joined Global

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a great start to an interesting story. the first few chapters start off strong. and soon you start to realize the story is going to take some wild turns. well developed back story with strong motivators for the main characters. and great beginning to an awesome story. can't wait to see what the author brings!
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too real 😂😂
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it's interesting that you have widely different challenges for each group. very nice.

|You will participate in an endurance battle lasting precisely 6 hours. During this Endurance Battle, a point will be added to the counter hanging in the center of the room each time you kill one of the Virtual Creatures. The enemies will come in waves of either 10, 20, or 30 at a time, and each new wave will begin within 5 minutes of the total number of creatures falling to 40% of the Initial headcount. There is no limit to how many Virtual Creatures can be generated. Each challenger MUST eliminate a minimum of 150 to advance to the Victory Floor, where you will have your awards distributed for completing the Obelisk.|

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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Joe_jo_3480
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ummmm complicated?! 🧐

Walking up beside Yennifer, heaving a tired sigh and rubbing her back tenderly, Geralt couldn't help but feel a pang of regret. Even though she had been in this AI form his entire life, she was indeed his birth Mother, although the story was complicated. 

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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oh... 0.0 lol I forget Benny is at the age. it really do be like. that

With his answer locked in, Benny fought back his raging hormones and looked back up at Yennifer.

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The Over-Break System

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Joe_jo_3480
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ooooooo fancy description skills. that was tough 😄 got me hyped lol. cyn is like 'game on'

Suddenly the Creature felt a sharp pain in its neck and noticed something was wrong as its body seemed to float away, along with the tips of its wings, which had all been severed by a shadow before it could search out its target. Its weak mind couldn't comprehend what happened, and it didn't even know to feel fear as the Begraz shattered into particles.

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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oh, interesting. that's good though

{Here it is, "To keep the Trials fair and balanced, all skills, potions, or abilities that grant additional rewards or Essence gain will be temporarily disabled or neutralized during your stay within the Obelisk." I admit, I glazed over it, but I still vaguely remembered what it said. That's why I found it weird that you said I had so many points.} Shrugging his shoulders, Brance swapped back to the Market.

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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Joe_jo_3480
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what a sneeky way to add a pretty key detail for abilities. intent defines the use. quite cool

          -You modify the trigger mechanic in the same way you formed them. During the creation, if you don't actively think about how it will trigger an explosion, the marble will automatically be created as a remote detonation [White Dwarf].-

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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oh noooow he tells us -.-

{Oh, one last thing, they like aquatic, damp or humid environments, so don't lose your cool if they try flooding the room.}

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The Over-Break System

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alright, new plan guys. beat me up until I'm almost dead. trust me

Exhaling shakily as he felt an increase in his stats wash over his body, Cynrik was astonished by how lucrative it was to come within a hair of death before recovering.

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The Over-Break System

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Joe_jo_3480
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all these options are a speed runners nightmare.

          |Congratulations, you have Cleared the First Floor. Would you like to continue to the Second Floor or Save and Exit?|

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The Over-Break System

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is this customer service

          |Option Five: Hear the Rules again.|

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The Over-Break System

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"Your secrets are your own, Ivar; I would never impose in such a way as to breach your privacy." Headmaster Rivia snorted and glared at Cynrik for a moment.

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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Joe_jo_3480
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tis but a flesh wound

Skidding to a stop on his side, Cynrik gritted his teeth and looked at his right arm, which had a significant horseshoe-shaped concaved break. Glaring angrily and fighting through the pain, Cynrik gripped his right arm with his left and yanked it down hard enough to reset the bone as he stood up. 

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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ummm what o.o lol kinda tough

Rolling on the ground, Benny bounced back to his feet and caught sight of the Spearman as he manipulated the ambient Metal particles extending the severed bone on his stump into a pointed edge, creating a lance where his arm used to be. 

The Over-Break System

The Over-Break System

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