Webnovel Author: Kingoftimepass - Novel Collection

Hi, i have already started reducing the size of paragraphs, as for the information dump, i am just trying to paint a picture is all. I will try to shorten the description

Excellent story, excellent work, excellent character development, good language, using mythological characters, a new culture, seems like a good read :P

Also FYI, if anybody is reading this review, this story's initial setting is across 14 universes (Loka in this story is equivalent to a universe)

I thought about making them clear as we go along and importance of the respective thing came along. As for Yug (Yuga is a very long period of time and is equal to 4320000). Else the thing becomes too descriptive and just become a huge information dump. I will slowly explain them as we go along. Atleast that is current plan