Webnovel Author: Dr_Introvert - Novel Collection

This is a story brimming with potential! It offers a unique premise based on a futuristic society obsessed with enhancements and a protagonist transported from our modern world. There's a great blend of humor and intriguing world-building, making it a fun read. A few key areas could use some polish, but overall its good read. Writing Quality: Your writing is clear and easy to follow especially for lemon scenes. Stability of updates: Low, Only 3 to 4 chapters per week. Author please increase update speed. Story Development: The pacing is a bit slow, focusing mainly on two characters until recently. More characters are being introduced in latest chapters. Character Design: The main character, Nox, could use more depth. His internal monologues are hilarious, but his personality needs further development. Supporting characters like Lyra, Thea are well-defined and engaging. World building: It's okay for now Final note: This story is suitable for anyone looking for well-written steamy scenes and humorous moments – Nox's internal struggles are a highlight. With greater attention to world-building, faster updates, and further development of Nox's character, this novel could become a real gem.