Webnovel Author: 0Mashroom - Novel Collection

0Mashroom

1yr

Replied to Dany_Overflower

His friend saw this and pulled out a knife from his pocket and tried to stab Edward, "Ouch, that hurt," Edward grabbed the blade with his right hand, he felt a bit cut from his hand, the blood began to appear, he holds the end of the edge.

A Second Chance of Having Youth

Urban · 0Mashroom

0Mashroom

1yr

Replied to McWms99

Appreciate your thoughtful review, currently, I'll be taking this book for a break/pause to fix some of its problems. just like you and others mentioned. hopefully, you find this book enjoyable in the future.

Operative's Moderate Work

Fantasy · 0Mashroom

0Mashroom

1yr

Replied to Demons_and_I

thank you for taking a look at the story. the advice you give me, i'll try as much as possble to fix some of them. not really confence with gramar skills but will try [img=recommend]

Operative's Moderate Work

Fantasy · 0Mashroom

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

The plot as far as I have read is great. Can't wait to find out how Cain and Ashur are related to each other when I delve further. If I have to say my piece, there was a few errors but its interesting overall. I wanted to give a 4.9 review rating but it always went to 4.8. Either way the story is good ignoring the minimal errors at first so I think the 5/5 is okay. So far this novel does not seem to bore me, there were a few errors but it's interesting. the plot is great altho not much I can say about the daily updates tho..... characters are fantastic I wonder if Cain and Ashur are related or brothers perhaps. anyway I give this read a 4.0 / 5 good one author [img=update]

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Action · Demons_and_I

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

Yo this novel is my cup o tea ngl. im sucker for simple old slice of life stories with no drama. just wholesome. the writing simple and easy to unserstand. bais gramar is ok. story itself is kinda fun and entertaining to read man too bad its short hopefully this het more chapters :( over all i give story a personal 6 cinimal rolls of sweet over 10 it got somw flaws but a still good read nice work author [img=recommend]

Miss Troublemaker

Urban · Lee_Hazel

0Mashroom

1yr

Replied to FA3zy

i'll keep that up

Operative's Moderate Work

Fantasy · 0Mashroom

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

I'll say this first your writing need some impovent,tbh I really like how this story like movie script. the story itself is good I like how mature and mystery that I'm getting from the few five chapters. the world background is kinda nice to know that there small details consider like the character and the world around them. overall my tip is that improve writing and editing cause sometimes dialogues are confusing.

STRANGERS- FAR FROM HOME

Horror · FA3zy

0Mashroom

1yr

Replied to ThePotatoKing

Thank you for the honest review, I'll be making sure to fix them. the red hood and Jocker dynamic is really entertaining for me to write, hopefully, you enjoy more chapters in the future.

Operative's Moderate Work

Fantasy · 0Mashroom

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

Have read 5 chaps of this novel. first I like the mc his very smart and has some sense in him to other stories that have a similar concept to this who had characters who are ignorant and cocky the authors say it is part of their charters but when it comes to the end of their stories they didn't even change. Okay the writing needs some improvement when it comes to action scenes sometimes it feels short and lacks some, I'm not saying that your writing is bad, and your grammar is alright but in case of miss typos recommended for you reread the chap before uploading. The story got some lore I'll say that the world-building is still confused about what setting this takes place idk probably just me, I might read more chaps to fully grasp what's going on. but overall a good read for killing time

Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake

Fantasy · ThePotatoKing

0Mashroom

1yr

Commented

One, I was naked.

Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake

Fantasy · ThePotatoKing

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

A decent read for a usual system novel, the beginning is quite confusing but in later chapters are good and funny, the only into like this novel the most is how the author shows how depressed is the mc. it really give him depth on its characterisation.

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0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

Overall the novel i'll give it a 7/10 from its writing alone I can tell that be author have some experience with handling its character, some my issued are the grammar need some improve but further reading I guess Author fix some of them. Too bad it's only 50chps it would be nice if were full blown series with at least 100+ chps. my only tips I can give is that expand more with r world building & characters I'm sure some of your new titles will surely be better.

Stockpiling My Abilities In Each Life

Urban · CetusWritings

0Mashroom

1yr

Replied to DruggedCookie

go read but a reminder the last chapter is not going to end with the usual harem route. so place your bets on the heroines ya like. [img=proud]

A Second Chance of Having Youth

Urban · 0Mashroom

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

first and foremost the story really does interest me however the writing is.... very shet, for one the grammars need some fixing, and what the hell are those long as s paragraphs, seriously make it short and clear, my phone fell from my face as I dose off reading in the early chapters. Characters let's just say too bland, can't even remember their names, or even have one, especially the Mc.

Evolutionis Player[Eng]

Fantasy · Evorum

0Mashroom

1yr

Commented

I began to skin the carcass of the monster to discover an evolutionary stone. This stone could be found on some monster and could grant attributes related to the beast. However it was relatively rare to get hold of one of these stones because of its magical nature and those who possessed them were incredibly powerful. Whouaw! What a chance! I could resell at least 20,000 gold coins at the guild auction. However, it could make me much stronger. So a choice took place in me: Sell the stone and buy a new house and equipment or absorb it to get a line that could be harmful. Indeed, it was possible that the stone produced a trait harmful to the individual, someone had obtained the scales of a sea snake on his whole body after the absorption of a stone!

Evolutionis Player[Eng]

Fantasy · Evorum

0Mashroom

1yr

Commented

Oh my god, this is such long as s paragraphs

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Evolutionis Player[Eng]

Fantasy · Evorum

0Mashroom

1yr

Posted

'll say after reading this story, will be on my good she t list, the writing itself was great although the dialogue is sometimes confusing, but the character do the heavy lifting from their design and interaction, the world building is one thing a mystery still don't know what comes after next, I'll be sure to read this from time to time. Overall try making the dialogue clear and easy to read next time, kudos for the aurthor

My boyfriend can control the darkness

Fantasy · funkiller_562

0Mashroom

1yr

Commented

ch 0 6 Chapter 6. Who's that cute girl?

My boyfriend can control the darkness

Fantasy · funkiller_562

0Mashroom

1yr

Commented

"No, we're good. We'll talk later Seth."

My boyfriend can control the darkness

Fantasy · funkiller_562

0Mashroom

1yr

Commented

My voice faltered when I met his face tightened in anger. I dashed outside, bolting passed the huge doors. It happened again? But I thought it only took anger to hurt someone, even when I'm nervous too. Am I even qualified to live as a normal kid?

My boyfriend can control the darkness

Fantasy · funkiller_562

Webnovel Author: 0Mashroom - Novel Collection

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A Second Chance of Having Youth

Operative's Moderate Work

Operative's Moderate Work

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Miss Troublemaker

Operative's Moderate Work

STRANGERS- FAR FROM HOME

Operative's Moderate Work

Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake

Project Salvation: Rise of the Venomous Snake

Stockpiling My Abilities In Each Life

A Second Chance of Having Youth

Evolutionis Player[Eng]

Evolutionis Player[Eng]

Evolutionis Player[Eng]

My boyfriend can control the darkness

My boyfriend can control the darkness

My boyfriend can control the darkness

My boyfriend can control the darkness

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