Webnovel Author: senshiAuthor

senshiAuthor

1yr

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Oh holy sh, finally this is back

Azuma was panting on the ground, a sheen layer of cold sweat covered him as his vision blurred and became cloudy.

senshiAuthor

2yr

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At least they managed to survive lol His abilities manifested as I kept reading this chap closely. A lot of pleasure I gain reading it, really, so thanks for the chapter!

"To the exit!" Azuma called out, "Now!"

senshiAuthor

2yr

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Torfinn moment The greatness epitomizes the humbleness.

Azuma took out two of his knives, slashing them across a hunter who looked unfazed. He let his instincts take control, to have the system guide his moves as he was slammed down on the ground.

senshiAuthor

2yr

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The only one who thinks rationally.

Azuma whispered, "Then we must make a way."

senshiAuthor

2yr

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Your writing style is getting more Light Novelish :)) It's 100% suitable to the story itself, and it's nice to see how your writing gets better and better

ch 0 9 Golden Dungeon

senshiAuthor

2yr

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ERROR! ERROR!

"I think…" Azuma rubbed his temples, "Someone is injured, let me check it out."

senshiAuthor

2yr

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Honestly, after Elden Ring this chap gives me distinctive chills, and my imagination flows as I feel every single emotions of them. It's great of a chapter

ch 0 8 The Garden of Gods

senshiAuthor

2yr

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How come they already started using -sama? I thought they weren't cause enough to themselves as they met each other not so long ago. But I can relate to it

"It belongs to Misaki–sama," Haru said, the puzzlement growing in her eyes, "Is this… blood?"

senshiAuthor

2yr

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I would cry praising this story if the underground had its own time and they really wandered for a long time

TRPR/9823: It's clearly been a long time

senshiAuthor

2yr

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A whole underground kingdom?

The two of them walk down the empty corridors of a buried underground temple. There were statues of gods and goddesses, mythical creatures, and stranger things carved out in the stone walls.

senshiAuthor

2yr

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There is nothing to say a lot about my impressions so far, because I'm not certain and it's not easy to judge by the first chapters

senshiAuthor

2yr

Posted

The prologue was exhilirating to read, it gave me psychological discussion mood, lol. By the way, the first five chapters are interesting as the story cannot uncover all events that happened. Since it's only the start of the story (I'm currently at 6th chap), I'm 100% confident to say that I'll surely be reading it forth just to know if there is a real thing beyond the veil!

senshiAuthor

2yr

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Sounds strange to describe of herself over everyone else. She seems to be an egocentric? Still I don't even know her character.

Is it wrong that I am born with a huge advantage over everyone else? Is my intelligence the only thing that people wanted from me?

senshiAuthor

2yr

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Beautiful respond. Another sigma rule to be pinned

The guy stared at me then pulled a bad finger, and walked away.

senshiAuthor

2yr

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No way XD Electrocars are for hillbllies

"Breaking News! A student has discovered a way to transfer Rabbit's DNA into herself, and grew Rabbit Ears!"

senshiAuthor

2yr

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Here I remembered Ayanokoji with his question, "Is there equality in this world?" I gave the analogy because I like psychology and this kind of thinking. It's very interesting

Do we live in a world where everybody can be happy? No.

It doesn't matter, right? As long as you have that drive to reach the top, you can be whoever you want. Whether you just want a simple life or the strength to be the prime minister or a leader of a large community, as long as you have the talent and skills, you can achieve all of those things.