fireguy2465 - Profile

This story has super high potential and I have definitely enjoyed my time reading this. The plot has very high potential and has shown flashes of it so far. The characters are loveable and great. The worldbuilding is stellar. Updates could come more consistently and the grammar still needs some work (I'm very heavy grammar after all). Also I hope the comedy gets better, as to me it really isn't the funniest type of humor.