Webnovel Author: Stormzz - Novel Collection

Stormzz

1yr

Posted

The story is progressing along at a solid, consistent speed. Descriptions of things are overall good, such as character designs. The tense sometimes jumps back and forth between past and present a little, although for the most part it is in the present (something I'm personally not a fan of). Overall, the characters are fairly well fleshed out for the chapters released, and there ae plenty of questions being posed.

Stormzz

1yr

Posted

The story starts with a rather intriguing opening before a large timeskip, at which point the pacing slows down as the author makes the effort to establish world information. The writing is done well, with care taken to include necessary details about things that could be important in the future.

Stormzz

1yr

Posted

It's a decent story, one that seems like it'll be safe if it sticks to the strength of the genre. The pacing is a little on the slower side, but that's not something necessarily bad. Overall, a strong start.

Stormzz

1yr

Posted

The story starts and we're introduced to what I assume to be the MC. He makes an immediate strong impact on the reader, before the story begins to develop. The setting is established well enough for the short current length, and it makes the reader feel like they know enough about the world at that point. As someone who doesn't really care about vulgarity, the only complaint that I have is that there seems to be too much needless swearing. But what I personally dislike won't be what others do, and it definitely fits the world.

Stormzz

1yr

Replied to Man_Doggo

I have no problem killing the current MC and bumping someone else to that role. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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Stormzz

1yr

Posted

Considering the site is filled with similar novels, this one is like a breath of fresh air. A story of intrigue, with few details given to us that make us ask questions about the world. A very strong opening to the novel.

The first chapter does a good job of setting up the story for the reader, introducing the mc and their transmigration. Seems like it will be a typical cultivation style story, so if you're someone who likes the genre then check this out.

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Stormzz

1yr

Posted

An interesting story. The fusion of magic and tech, along with sci-fi elements is something that isn't all that explored, so this story is rather unique in that regard. The reader is immediately presented with a mystery that draws them in, and that serves as the basis for the story Good luck author.

Astral Arcanum

Sci-fi · Gabriantheus

Stormzz

1yr

Posted

An interesting beginning, with a lot of things to hook the reader in and make them curious about the characters and the world. System seems different, and the interactions between it and the mc are witty.

One Punch.

Fantasy · Man_Doggo

Stormzz

1yr

Replied to 00_darkness_00

If you mean the Leadership skill that he unlocked in the skill tree, there's not really a way to use it. The first skill in each tree is little more than an additional stat point, with the added bonus over just buying the stat of providing progress to unlock deeper skills in the skill tree (that will have things that are more like traditional skills.)

ch 24 - Surprise Package

System of Legends: I Will Lead Them All!

Sci-fi · Stormzz

Stormzz

1yr

Replied to 00_darkness_00

It was just the last one that Gus got in the third round.

*Enemies Eliminated: Round 3: [1]*

System of Legends: I Will Lead Them All!

Sci-fi · Stormzz

Stormzz

1yr

Replied to 00_darkness_00

6:30 in this instance.

'Half six? Not too early,' he thought to himself, swinging his legs out of bed. He walked to his door and pulled it open, expecting the corridor to be empty. As he opened the door the corridor was submerged in darkness, a single green light blinking from the fire alarm in the centre of the corridor acting as the only source of light. As though it recognised the fact that a door was open, the lights flickered to life one by one, starting with the closest one overhead.