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It was so hard to read with all the poor grammar and spelling in this book. It felt like I'm reading Abandoned Empress manwa all over agian. And we all know how terrible that ended. So, it's not hard to guess the direction of this story. Not my cup of tea...

The story has potential but has too many flaws to continue after 30+ chapters. So many grammar mistakes and punctuation marks thrown around that it gives me whiplash. Not expounded on the apocalyptic background on the previous world the heroine lived before. Such as zombies and spiritual power, nor how she lived for so long. What was it like for her? How did it become a dying world and how did she get these pwers? Was she born with it or did her world developed it for the battle-class of people to have at a chance of survival. The description of characters is quite lackluster and the only one I could grasp the most is the past Yu Dong. Even though I'm supposed to dislike her, she's the most described. Seeing as the protagonist is dangerously close to becoming a Mary Sue with how it's going. The only compliments I could write are the two different genres mentioned that not many would expect: Science Fiction and Ancient History-Fantasy. Especially how the new world works and how she must adapt to the new environment. It's what piqued my interest to read this book. However, I've already hit the limit mark of free chapters and hope the author would take these criticism to improve her writing going forward. You have potential, just polish your skills and you'll march on stronger than before.