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xash_alan

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2022-02-21 Joined India

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Anything less than perfect is suffering?

"Golden finger… what golden finger?... That bastard… He promised me yet… How could you… Do you just hate me being happy?... Do you want to see me suffer some more?... Is this right, you fucking crazy old man!!!"

Ascension of the Samsara Sage

Ascension of the Samsara Sage

Fantasy · _DreamWeaver

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Replied to Abayomi_Atoyegbe
I meant, what did he lose during this scene to act this agitated lol He is already living a life much better than his past one

"Golden finger… what golden finger?... That bastard… He promised me yet… How could you… Do you just hate me being happy?... Do you want to see me suffer some more?... Is this right, you fucking crazy old man!!!"

Ascension of the Samsara Sage

Ascension of the Samsara Sage

Fantasy · _DreamWeaver

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Replied to Layios
or like you know, give him some time to adjust. It's just the second chapter lol
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I would suggest checking out some google articles on paragraph spacing, and punctuation.

They both kissed long and hard their tongue exploring each other's mouth like never before,Simon's hand went towards her chest and he cupped her left breast which was already hard for him,he kneed the tip of her nipple and was pleased to hear her moan for him. The couple broke from the kiss to take a deep breath, Simon brought his mouth towards her other nipple and sucked it with a lot of fervor while his hand was on the other,unable to handle the pleasure Havilah cried out and grabbed his hair bringing their bodies closer,he then slid his hand into her already wet pussy which was wide open for him,he slid a finger into her and played with her opening,seeing her in immense pleasure with her back arched and unable to speak,he added another finger and fastened his movement bringing her to the peak,he then resume the kiss fiercely as if to assure each other that the coming days shall be fought together,when he sensed that she was ready,he opened his zipper and freed his cock which was already hard and throbbing,he placed himself on her wet entrance and entered slowly pushing himself up to see the expression of pure bliss and satisfaction on her face.

Havilah's reign of terror

Havilah's reign of terror

Urban · Pastpassion

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21 is still too young for marriage , silly father!
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"It my father, Havilah replied sniffing,"he still wants me to get married to Don and I don't know what to do anymore,I delayed this with the excuse that am not of age but now am 21 and he isn't falling for the trick any longer.

Havilah's reign of terror

Havilah's reign of terror

Urban · Pastpassion

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oh or you can just ease her nervousness by getting close to her
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eh what a scum
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'ye' appears foreign in a Korean setting tbh
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Has Geumbi grown up in another country?

"Up to ye." Geumbi walked first. Eunseo shouted to call Geumbi, Geumbi left her just like that, Eunseo certainly wouldn't stay silent, she followed Geumbi's departure in a hurry.

(Delete) From The Future

(Delete) From The Future

Fantasy · Tatalouniver

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You can avoid repeating Geumbi again and again but using 'she' T-T
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on her*
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Early in the morning, a woman was running down the street she was passing, she had to go to her office immediately because today was a very important day. Her long legs kept trying to run as fast as she could, while her eyes stared at the clock on her wrist. Ooh no, time is very limited.

(Delete) From The Future

(Delete) From The Future

Fantasy · Tatalouniver

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