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Oh😯, that explains a lot.

Deviro, the male fairy with light blue hair, chuckled at Gala's question. "All fayes on Aelfrey are normal human size. What you saw in the forest is what we call tarafreyshio; we shrink to tiny sizes every time we enter your dimension," Deviro replied, pointing at her.

Galatea: The Last Whisperer

Galatea: The Last Whisperer

Fantasy · Missy_Castillo

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'How will I get back home?' The question she's been avoiding since falling from that hole finally catches up with her.

Galatea: The Last Whisperer

Galatea: The Last Whisperer

Fantasy · Missy_Castillo

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At the end of the paragraph: he was quite an experienced what? Vampire? Mage? Fighter?
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Who said this?
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HALF A HEART

HALF A HEART

Realistic · Azure04

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How did he demonstrate? Pinching his fingers together?
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A comfortable spot? Position?
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"...understand," the little girl said. Or you can keep the current structure and capitalize the "the."
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In later paragraphs you write "Daenerys." Is the apostrophe here a mistake?
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Beautifully said.

I try to ignore the rumours, but when people have lived with prophecy for so long, coincidence can be mistaken for revelation.

To Burn a Kingdom

To Burn a Kingdom

Fantasy · Aeirana

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