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MoonlightBomber

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An indie game developer and writer. Has a fondness for RPGs and visual novels. Also a collector of stuff. Support me on Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/moonlightbomber

2022-03-12 Joined Philippines

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It's how everything is perceived in this post-truth era.

He thought about all the posts he saw on various forums and social media and how chaotic they were. It was a sea of constant bickering. No one accepted any source as reliable anymore, yet few were willing to do any verification themselves. It was as if humanity was stuck in a limbo state, seeing more and more information but refusing to evaluate what was true and false anymore. Instead, everybody stuck to their prior beliefs as a default because it was easier. In the end, this only created greater tension and divided the populace further than ever before.

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So, my initial impressions. The setting is good, the characters are good, but the beginning needs to have a little more punch. I can understand you employing the third-person perspective to narrate what is going on, but if you want to get your readers hooked more, the opening need to have this "personal touch", And finally, you need to fix the synopsis. Just tell who are the main players and what they are playing, and not just cut and paste an excerpt.
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