Teken_

9mth

Posted

so much gay baiting, such a waste of time

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Teken_

9mth

Commented

pretty sure the dude doesn't know what consent is either

"Ah so that's the case. Hahahaha! Young lady, your thought process is quite 'cute' hahahaha! You're one of those tsundere things aren't you? Ok ok, I got it. I 'won't' be Attie's grandpa." Li Jian laughed as he gave her a knowing wink.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Teken_

9mth

Commented

this dude is fucking disgusting, she should just kill him

"I hope the way I convinced her was to your liking. Since I went out of my way to do this, don't you think I should get some kind of reward?" Nan Tian asked with a smile.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Teken_

9mth

Commented

truly utterly uninteresting, gonna have to skip my way through this bs

ch 773 Going Above And Beyond

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

Teken_

9mth

Commented

I'm really not sure i can give this story anymore of my time, this is just another disappointing chapter. I might come back after I've let a few chapters release so I can just skip the unimportant ones. I'm really disappointed in the author

ch 64 Tender Lies - Kaede

A Place You Remember

Fantasy · Dubsora

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9mth

Commented

I'd really enjoy a catch up with Maria, and how she is doing. feels a bit like she was abandoned as a character

ch 698 Sharing the Firmament?

Immortal Ice Empress: Path to Vengeance

Fantasy · Dreyerboys

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9mth

Commented

tbh not the biggest of the pov of her parents, personally just not a fan of reading about hetro couples. maybe try a pacing shift, the last few chapters seems to be a bit on the filler side than progressing any sort of story

ch 772 An Invitation

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi · HopelesslyRomantic

Teken_

10mth

Commented

pretty sure I could have just skipped this chapter and it wouldn't affect my understanding of the story in any way. you don't need to do a chapter each of its just gonna be filled

ch 58 Anti-Mage

A Place You Remember

Fantasy · Dubsora

Teken_

10mth

Commented

keep up the good work

ch 67 TAKING SHELTER

Sage of Shadows

Fantasy · NEET1o1

Teken_

10mth

Replied to Merricia_Dickson

you just need to work on your prose, the idea is solid

DREAMS WITHIN DREAMS A LOVE STORY WITH A TWIST.

LGBT+ · Merricia_Dickson

Teken_

10mth

Commented

I'm more disappointed, you picked the lowest hanging fruit with the goblin stuff

ch 51 Murderer - Kaede

A Place You Remember

Fantasy · Dubsora

Teken_

10mth

Posted

the writing makes this terrible to read, so bad I had to drop it

DREAMS WITHIN DREAMS A LOVE STORY WITH A TWIST.

LGBT+ · Merricia_Dickson

Teken_

10mth

Commented

nice to see this back, have some stones

ch 66 VISITING ‘FRIENDS’

Sage of Shadows

Fantasy · NEET1o1

Teken_

10mth

Replied to Dubsora

sigh

ch 48 Feelings

A Place You Remember

Fantasy · Dubsora

Teken_

10mth

Commented

this is starting to be stretched out too long, please don't do the they keep missing each other bs

ch 48 Feelings

A Place You Remember

Fantasy · Dubsora

Teken_

10mth

Commented

good work, excited to see what happens

ch 0 3 Chapter 2: The Goddess's Blessing

A Scientist's Fantasy

Fantasy · OnNa_MuSha

Teken_

10mth

Commented

this is starting to get really boring please get this pace changed

ch 677 Three Months

Immortal Ice Empress: Path to Vengeance

Fantasy · Dreyerboys

Teken_

10mth

Commented

food not good

Both Sakura and Charlie calmed down as soon as they were faced with the threat of becoming dragon good. They did not want to get injured for unnecessary reasons.