Webnovel Author: eros_sachet - Novel Collection

I began to run as fast as i could, the large ice was still sliding down and it happened to be coming my way, i wouldn't want to follow another path or i would miss the way to khandland, so i had to keep on running. I ran fast as i could, the avalanche still rolling down the precipice fastly.And by now the floor began to crack all the snow blew up to the air. And the whole place became ice, i wish someone should just save me this instant. The ice also began to crack, it made me loose my balance and i fell, the whole ice parted into two halves. I was happy that it would fall into the river, but instead another ice was falling from ahead, i tried to run fast but the ice was too slippery, i decided to jump over the rock, i wanted to jump and alas the map flew out of my hands, i cursed myself for not putting it inside my satchel earlier.I had to guess the right way now, it was all the avalanche fault, i wonder why all these keep happening, until i saw a crooked tree and went to hide under it, the avalanche rolled away falling off the mountain and breaking down the ground.

Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

DONT DO THAT TO MY FAV BIRD-

I hated owls, not only because they are nocturnal creatures, but they are one of our enemies, and are always considered evil.

Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

You are doing great! 💗💗

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Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

Maybe keep the paragraph short, it will be easy to read-

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Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

heh real fun starts now

ch 0 3 An Intruder

Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

FL wants wool- but it's summer season?

I stood up and plucked out one mango from the tree, i had always hated this fruit ever since i was young but right now i have no choice.

Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

i think you can make the last sentence a bit better 'I just grew up and found that tradition' sounds off.

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Mated To The Ice Prince

Fantasy · Rainbowprincess

eros_sachet

1yr

Commented

A whole paragraph out of a sentence- damn

I was shocked seeing mother and father's lifeless body fall to the ground, blood was oozing out mom's neck, while the sword thrusted out of father's back, i only remembered mom and dad telling me to take Kira and run, but right now i couldn't run, i had millions of thoughts in my head, who were those peoples, yes there were invaders but they looked strange, father had earlier sent his men to war, and most of the enemies were killed, resulting our men to bring the ones alive as slaves, and our kingdom became very popular and the best among all seven kingdoms.