CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Posted

First off the author has an expansive vocabulary. These pages are full of medical terms and multi-syllable words. The story is interesting but the scenes are very granular, lots of internal monologue making the pace a bit slow. I am curious how this plays out so I think I’ll add it to my library and stick with it for a while.

CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Replied to MasterPizza

Thank you so much for the insightful review and comments!

CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Posted

I was fully engaged during the first chapter, the scene was tense and gritty, but the pace seemed to slow down a bit in the later chapters. I assume we are still early on in the story and that might explains why I’m not sure what direction it’s heading, but overall I love this, and I LOVE the author’s fearless writing style. Nicely done!

CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Commented

Well that took an interesting turn!

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CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Commented

This… your story is what I’ve been looking for.

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CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Commented

What a way to open up the first scene. So many feelings right now. Wow! I love your style.

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CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Replied to CN_Owens_Author

You will probably think I’m a noob but I just realized where you placed this comment! I’m still getting used to navigating through webnovel. I did want to say that I really like your writing style, and again, I appreciate your input.

Howling Shadows, while it is a work of fiction, tries to cover some heavy topics. In these pages you will find tragedy, deep love, and the wickedness of people. Ultimately, the goal of any good story is one that has characters who start out weak and vulnerable, but rise above it all in the end. Overall, I hope these characters resonate with you they way they did with me over the time I've spent writing about them.

Howling Shadows

Horror · CN_Owens_Author

CN_Owens_Author

1yr

Replied to MasterPizza

You are absolutely right. I think my goal was to begin this scene in a very dark place and have the reader rooting for the FL when she finally found the strength to fight back. I appreciate your input!

Howling Shadows, while it is a work of fiction, tries to cover some heavy topics. In these pages you will find tragedy, deep love, and the wickedness of people. Ultimately, the goal of any good story is one that has characters who start out weak and vulnerable, but rise above it all in the end. Overall, I hope these characters resonate with you they way they did with me over the time I've spent writing about them.