Webnovel Author: GMSJakers - Novel Collection

This book, if edited to make the writing feel more complete, would be an absolute ride to read. No doubt about it. The development is really balanced and nice.

The writing quality is really good, I do have to say. The plot, there isn't much to really say so far being we only have five chapters right now, but I suspect there will be an exciting growth because of this.

There is a unique writing style that I do appreciate. When making new boundaries for certain things like this, it offers something fresh and new.

First starts this very moody feeling that just gets you in an odd way, once that I didn't expect to exactly feel. It's weird. Super weird, and I love it.

The book struggles a bit with some generic characters, which makes the depth of the story a bit empty, although with some solid world-building.

It's a fresh take, and a more interesting variation of the use of magic, which makes it for a more innovative type of book.

Editing is remarkable in this book. Like, surprising. I'm not sure if I can remember a single grammar mistake. If you want some good writing quality, this is the place.

The story does enough to get your interest, with fine writing quality and a plot that doesn't get you confused at the least. What I would suggest is getting a nice cover to go along with the book.

This book really shines with the imagery, making it so vivid and alive. The plot is engaging, and I'm sure you'll have a nice time with this book.

The build-up to which this happens makes this book worthwhile, in my opinion, with a good plot that continues onwards with the book.

The progression of the plot is very neat, and really peaks my interest. The characters are quite engaging as well.

At first I thought this story was a fan-fiction of the Eternals at first, but my mistake (unless I'm still right), but the words are very descriptive.

The plot really grabs your attention, being quite intricate compared to most others, which creates this interest that captures the reader undeniably.

The way the setting is described is very well done, instantly grabbing your attention as you continue reading, and being the fairly new stage that its in, I can only hope it grows to be even better.

Thank you so much, that really makes me happy to see how you feel about it.

I'm not letting that writing slide. That is some pretty top-star writing, no doubt about it, and the development is amplified by this certain style.

Good writing, good storyline, and a pretty engaging premise is really what makes this book here, no doubt about it. One won't regret reading this book.

Witty dialogue is the greatest thing to ever happen in storytelling. The way this book uses this craft to such an advantage fills me with joy.